[char] Avarian (knight sorcerer)

[lf2TimmE1]

i just thought about spriting a knight with green armour..and this is the outcome

[kubamaster93]

Hmm, nice

But IMO head is a bit strange
Armour is very good

Is it a single sprite? Maybe you will make him into character?

[Silverthorn]

agree to KM93, the head doesn't really fit to the armor. I can't really describe WHAT looks so strange, I can just say THAT it looks odd....
Also, the body is too much twisted to the viewer, should be more turned to the right.

That's the bad stuff. And now the good stuff:

The rest.

[Chishio]

... Agree with above posters.

My opinion about the head though is that there is so much white in it it is kinda optically blending it. You might want to try separating the eyes from the hair as well as closing the mouth. I do like the ferocious look of it though.

[KaywonnJuto]

I really actually like this idea...I hope this becomes a real char (doubt it since u just do sprites)
His skin color looks a little too pale...
And I would like it even more if he had one of those cool Hoods coming over his head (matching his cape)
but not like Sorcerer like medivial kind, plus his shoulders look too bulged up, idk...
Put part of his cape around his neck like Firzen...I'm just saying...
yeah...the rest looks great by the way - keep it up
Can I see what he would look like with the Hood on, plz?

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He also looks like he's looking at his hair... :confused:
(lol just an opinion)

[Marshall]

don't like the colours. Green armour, red cap and white hair is a bit over the top.

[KaywonnJuto]

Personally I think It looks kinda cool

[SirFrog]

I like it all, except the eyes. they look...kinda wrong somehow.

[Madara Uchiha]

that is really good my friend, 9/10

[lf2TimmE1]

thx for feedback at all...and here is the new version with black hair and improved eyes