[char] Karen ( our project : betit_ngoan + Kid )

[betitngoan]

sprite : betit_ngoan ( this is me )
DC : kid ( kieutuan )

sheet 1 (Click to View)

face:

some move



Run + A

D v J

and effect ( i made it by pain )

[Magnamancy]

First off, Welcome to the forums

I have just one question about your character, is she a earth-style
user/bender/something like controlling earth?

If your looking for feedback on your character;
-The face sprite is nicely styled and the coloring of the head is well
done.
-Standing frames - Her legs change size, and her shoulders are a bit
too wide when compared to the concept art, but pretty good all up.
-Walking frames - other than the shoulders, it looks pretty decent.
-Punching frames - Her legs shading changes sudenly, but its a nice
looking combo, its only the shoulder width again that throws me
-The Rock - is nice, the shading stays the same throughout, but thats
harder to notice, so not really a prob.

The concept art is well done, very manga-ish, I particularly like the
detail in the shattered rock in the bottom-right.

Hope this helps

[betitngoan]

you like it ????
woa
i like u


{{{{{I have just one question about your character, is she a earth-style
user/bender/something like controlling earth?}}}}}}}}
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> YES <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

sorry for my bad english

[prince_freeza]

well ithink we have something here...i didnt know that untill i scroled the rest of the page down i relly like those rocks u made just fix the standing thats it....

[betitngoan]

thank u very much
u are so cool
i am your fan

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new sprite ( made by me )
unfinish but ..... are you like it??

[vktewari]

You are a good spriter and an artist too. I really like the pencil images of your character. As for the sprites you'll need to fix them a bit. The legs move wierdly and in the standing frame the right hand moves wierdly. If you fix it, it will look even better.

[Jed37]

Awesome sprites! Just need to fix (as others have said) the shoulder width and walking frames. I look forward to seeing this character complete!

[Ascor]

the complete walking frame looks weird
she seems to twist her legs around like she had no bones
and the shoulder is so... fixed
would you walk around to kill someone with a fixed shoulder?
i guess not

[betitngoan]

I know but now I lost the USB should not do anything. I'm very worried


sorry for my bad english

[Angel_Adam]

I love the face pic and the char.
Those rock sprites looks fimiliar to me,
Yes,they are made by MH in lf2 kingdom.