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10-27-2009, 12:41 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-27-2009, 12:46 PM by Gad.)
This is great for an amateur, I think. I realy like the Tourque and his position. There are some problems with proportions, as you can see Tengrell has too long neck, but Lotus doesn't even have it.
There is not so much shading, but it's great. You should use little darker colour to shade.
Keep going.
1. For an amateur:
Sho 4/10 (Sorry, I realy don't like him)
Green 8/10 (Nice pose, but shading could be better)
Lotus 6/10 (Since it's just copy+paste and he has no neck)
S-Gate 7/10 (Just c+p+r...)
Tourque 9/10 (Realy like it, but shading could be better, needs some dark)
Heori 8,5/10 (It's cool, but more shading please)
Reiorel 6,5/10 (I don't realy like it, but you did well just by c+p)
Tengrell 6,5/10 (Too long neck, just recoloured bat+woody)
2. The best:
-Tourque
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like gad said not bad for a noob. hey i bet if u look at some tuts we have here you'd definitely improve!
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sho REALLY needs more shading, Same with all your sprites. But good sprites for a newcomer.
(what graphic program did you use?)
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10-28-2009, 08:57 AM
(This post was last modified: 10-28-2009, 08:59 AM by Gad.)
I guess your'e using paint only. Use free Gimp/Photofiltre/PaintNet. Or you can buy Photoshop, but it costs about 500$-1000$, that's not that bad.
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Eeeh. I think that's worse than buying, cause you pay for ease of this application, if you don't want to buy I prefer downloading free applications, even if they are little harder to operate. But that's only mine idea.
And one more tip:
View the tutorial section man :P.
Or you can just eat the burger.
@omg i'm so stupid, sry for useless post