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Simoneon · (This post was last modified: 03-21-2010, 05:25 PM by Simoneon.)

Yea, I'm here to show you some of my latest creations.
Comments are veeeeeery welcome ;D

The Lost Global Mod · 03-20-2010, 09:58 PM

i like the design of the first..

issues though.. the face is a bit unnatural.. especially the shading at the lower part of his face.
to the second one well duh, you should improve the hair and change the clothes more..

Simoneon · 03-20-2010, 10:35 PM

Yea. Thanks dude. I will try to improove. ;D
Good thing I have a great teacher (:

Anyways. New one:
[Image: outfit3.png]

JossuaDC · 03-20-2010, 10:41 PM

Nice.
The first is very badass with the gigantic, popped collar.
Dracula-style, y'know.

I'm training my spriting-skills too, but instead of single sprites, I'm trying to do entire spritesheets... HARD AS HELL

Either way, keep 'em coming, Simoneon.

Simoneon · (This post was last modified: 03-20-2010, 10:46 PM by Simoneon.)

'Ey thanks Jossua. ;D
Do you mean that collar looks bad, 'r good?

Yea, before I start creating whole sheets I decided to make myself skills abit-up. Not so hard, & 'njoyable instead.

'Ell yea.

Tomorrow might come more sprites. As for now - I should go sleep, maeby.

LutiChris · (This post was last modified: 03-20-2010, 11:23 PM by LutiChris.)

I think that you have a problem with ummm....knowing where the light is going to be
it's best to just have the stance but if it makes u feel uncomfortable just try to change the clothes (only)
the head might be the hardest for you if u can't manage the clothes...
have the darkest color and the lightest you change the lum +30
don't have the lightness spread, as i can see from the 1st pic already, it's spread out and messy
the 2nd and third are very hard to distinguish where the light is coming from
u made it clear on the 1st but it was messy
just keep practicing, u have the potential ability...
remember always start out with dark colors and clean it up after using the light (don't spread it will look messy)

Wiro · (This post was last modified: 03-20-2010, 11:51 PM by Wiro.)

before i say anything, will a negative feedback to a moderator cause a warning/being banned? Nah, I have a good mood today, so you're lucky - Simoneon edit:YESS!!!

they're imo kinda messy, all of them. the hue colors are a bit unclean and so on...
what i noticed was that the pants in the first sprite looks rly nice (probably just recoloured...) but anyway the only "hint" i could give is to use "cleaner" colors for the face n stuff...

LutiChris · 03-20-2010, 11:30 PM

thts basically what i said....if u read mine Facepalm

i know urs is summ'd up but tryin to make him understand

Simoneon · (This post was last modified: 03-20-2010, 11:39 PM by Alectric.)

ha. ha. ha.
No really. What did you expect? Some uber sprite for first try? Yes, we only expect the best here in the sprite forums ~ Alectric

Thanks, I will regard into your critics and observations and try to improove my skill level, which is quite obvious ;D

Alectric · 03-20-2010, 11:46 PM

the firen edit is awful, but the other 2 look pretty funny/good.
the red-hair guy looks like he is jabbing something into his own butt Shock

also, his hair is a solid mass, how about some individual hair shading?

the davis guy looks kinda creepy. nice work, are those horns coming out of his shoulders?

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