[Hell_f vs. Alectric] Sketch battle

[Alectric]

my character. His name is Kinyo. he has a bee gun, so he may as well shoot bees.
sorry, i couldnt get a good colour scheme going, and i thought it would be better not to colour it, as it would save time overall.
i like drawing with pencils, i should do it more often

i would also like to point out that this is not a who-has-the-best drawing competition, and critique is not welcome.

your turn Hell_f

[Eddie]

You've started a war now Alectric, nice picture though.
But yeah, I'd have said to add a few more folds to the coat and maybe widen the opening of the coat at the bottom a bit. Other than that - good picture . well done.

[hell fightter]

i was thinking alot... i have few sketches ofsteampunk characters or godzilla son (half man... like gad... theire twins... from a rape XD)

and i decide to use my olg good (sorry for nothing new)
Hell_Face!!!!
an undead warrior.... yeah... so nothing so say bout him... OH WAIT!! he kicks buts (that was badass)

let the battle begin!

[Alectric]

lol, do i go first then?
k, ill do my best.

@Eddie, lol, srsly? i thought there was too much clothing folds, and i thought it looked like his clothes were rotting :P
thanks anyway, i thought something was wrong with the jacket, but i couldnt figure it out, and i wasnt going to redraw it

anyway, like i said, keep critique to yourselves/minimum

[prince_freeza]

stay tuned for the next ep of "lfe sketch battle" lol...
anyways nice drawings both of you guys. do your best.

[hell fightter]

go for it if you want to, if not.. i can do it

[hell fightter]

well if i will collour it, it would be a greyscale... but i think that ill be just upload "sketches"

[Alectric]

@betitngoan, please, i dont want it to be coloured in.

@Hell F, sorry for the delay, i had school to worry about :P

here is my starting scene:


i probably did it wrong, as in i should put my character in advantage, but meh.

wow, my scanner is pretty crap :P i cuts off the bottom, and i cant fix that

EDIT: woops, i just realised i had your claw on the wrong hand :P oops

[snorsorbet]

Look, your character is aiming towards the head with his gun.

hell fightter, it's a trap!

[hell fightter]

yay finaly ill make something quick and ugly cause im hurry to work D:

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yeeeaaahhh.... didnt expect it THAT UGLY XD
sorry for that creeppy page but im bussy lately it would be ok if i could post my part at weakends? D:

yeaaaah.... anyway... gad! that old style you mean? XD

ill do better next time XD"