[Char] Jim

[Whaat]

I got very inspired from Clide, Earth and Zack, so i decided to make my own char. But i´m not very good spriter, i´m more at DCing, so i decided to make copypaste char and prove that with good design and ideas you can make working char, even if you can´t sprite.
Jim:
He is cool guy and he always keeps his hands in pockets.
Breathing:

In-game it´s little slower.

Punching:

In-game he also moves so he doesn´t move his legs for nothing

Run_a:

Ending is little buggy, but in-game it works fine, you get the idea. And he also moves forward ofc.

Super_p:

For some reason this is slooowww, in-game it´s much faster.

Everything is better in-game xp anyways, i thought gifs would be better than those thumbnails.

Critics&Comments!
E. And if Prince_Freeza or anyone else would want to make a face pic, i would really appreciate it

[MnM]

Wowzy Nice punch frames ^^. Breathing frames could be better and as u said u are not good at spriting, its nice for a starter. And, bend his body a little in that circling frame (i dunno how to express it) Good luck ^^.

[chase123]

Looks quite okay,his face looks squished,and his running does not look at all like he is running,hands are also thin.

The super attack looks quite good.
Good luck on your character!

Edit:Sorry dudes.

[Wiro]

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and his running does not look at all like he is running
...

dude it's the run attack, not the running *facepalm*

'bout the char... spritewise it kinda sucks, and you should change the color of the jacket and maybe hair

but as you said it's more like a dc char i look forward to try it cause overall it's kinda original

[Whaat]

firzenx:
Understood.

Chase123:
What the **** xp ? It´s run_a (run_attack) like Wiro said.
Hands are thin purposely, i want him to have weak but fast attacks that have many combos, so i think that Deep´s or Mark´s arms wouldn´t fit.

his face looks squished

Maybe that´s becouse he is looking down? He is cool char, he can´t look straight :o

Wiro:

spritewise it kinda sucks

Oh thanks :3
I thought about changing the jacket color, but i don´t know what color would be better, and it isn´t same blue as Davis so is it bad to be blue?

E: He also has jump_a made, coming soon.

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Basic sprites are almost done, injured and flying sprites (hardest ones) are left.

[prince_freeza]

done ill make the face pic for ya just tell me i make his head down?
edit: i think the sprites are cool, i never seen this look before.

[Marshall]

the animation of super_p makes his arm rather noodle-like in terms of texture.

I suggest looking at breathing tutorial such as this one by kimbo:
http://img525.imageshack.us/i/breathing0jz.gif/

there's definitely too much chest heaving right now that indicates asthma :P

[Whaat]

done ill make the face pic for ya just tell me i make his head down?

Yes please :3 head down is cool :o

the animation of super_p makes his arm rather noodle-like in terms of texture.

Yeah, maybe they little look like noodles, but i won´t see it in-game, and atm i think there´s no reason to fix it before i have finished other sprites.

there's definitely too much chest heaving right now that indicates asthma

Uhm, there is 1 extra pixel up so i think it´s not that bad? And if i make it like it is in that tut, it will look boring cuz his hands don´t move at all becouse he keeps them in pockets, so i think it´s better this way.

[Angel_Adam]

this char is nice...he looks loke hes sleeping so make him A SLEEPY CHAR and add above his head Zzzz flowin it would be kewl

[Ariel]

very like the style of this char
hope u finish it
well
i do for u face pic
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/6148/ompy.png
hope u like it
PF can do it better XD