[Char] Olsem

[Ariel]

[Silverthorn]

Heh, that looks promising! Your new project after Earth?

[oliveryungo]

Wow, now that is awesome!
The design is great, but the shading of the arms makes it look like a mannequin

[Trickityhouses]

hey cool, the color combo on him is pretty good and the face is nice. the weapon is kinda weird tho. might as well just be a cool walking stick instead of some strange staff. The orb staff really doesn't fit his out doors type of outfit. anyways this looks promising!

[Ariel]

thanks and the facepic not quit good so i make new one
here is the start:

[Silverthorn]

Hmm, I actually liked the old design of the face-pic. Only thing missing there is the hair-outline. Don't make it too cluttered up with elements (ie. hat and staff)

[YinYin]

make his shoulders evenly broad so his right arm doesnt hang in the air poorly glued to the body:

its minor but has a heavy impact imo

also dont cover his face on the face picture

[Ariel]

well i ddo it later
but just on the stand frame or in all of them?

and here is the facepic V2

[Bamboori]

imo that walking looks a bit strange, i think hes moving too much.
also, rework the sphere in the face pic :P

[betitngoan]

uhm
i love your att
it's smooooooth

and.... Yin Yin is right ( and he's black id is handsome )
fix it as fast as good
it's important

keep it up !!