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Character: Olsem
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Heh, that looks promising! Your new project after Earth?
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#3
Wow, now that is awesome! :D
The design is great, but the shading of the arms makes it look like a mannequin O.o
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#4
hey cool, the color combo on him is pretty good and the face is nice. the weapon is kinda weird tho. might as well just be a cool walking stick instead of some strange staff. The orb staff really doesn't fit his out doors type of outfit. anyways this looks promising!
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#5
thanks and the facepic not quit good so i make new one
here is the start:
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Hmm, I actually liked the old design of the face-pic. Only thing missing there is the hair-outline. Don't make it too cluttered up with elements (ie. hat and staff)
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#7
make his shoulders evenly broad so his right arm doesnt hang in the air poorly glued to the body:
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its minor but has a heavy impact imo

also dont cover his face on the face picture
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#8
well i ddo it later
but just on the stand frame or in all of them?

and here is the facepic V2
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#9
imo that walking looks a bit strange, i think hes moving too much.
also, rework the sphere in the face pic :P
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#10
uhm
i love your att
it's smooooooth

and.... Yin Yin is right ( and he's black id is handsome )
fix it as fast as good
it's important

keep it up !!

sorry 4 my bad eng
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