09-03-2011, 09:30 AM (This post was last modified: 09-11-2011, 01:50 PM by shin hanazumi.)
Off topic first:
AAAAKH!! at yesterday night, this thread is ready with happy style. But, because of my laptop's battery is run out, all restarted. All Gif is finished, Thread is finished, only loading page! and god curse me TTATT. That was an accidential again for me. (Why always when i want to post a serious project, accident is coming?! S***)
Back to topic(Now, with sad and angry feels, i force my self to make this thread with Happy style):
Hahaha... this newbie has a freak project again at character(again O_o), this is my first time to use not 79x79 sprites too and gifs(more late then the real), so if there is any bug, please tell me.
Let's see:
Derax v1.27
This Char have no story because this is not my originally char. This is only flash stick moved(by me) to LF2.
power: His power is fire, he will be able to attack fire with his weapon, and all fire comes from his weapon name Flade, the weapon can changes into 3 type: Buster, Sword, Speed.
weaknesses: he can only attack with fire with his weapon Flade, without it he's only a normal human. and take a little time to change each types.
about:he was actually a normal human, but he train hard to be strong, until someday he make his own weapon called Flade with the ability to make fire attacks. and be more stronger with fire.
RAPID BUSTER (17mp + 34mp + 34mp + 34mp > 17mp + 34mp + 34mp + 34mp > ...)
A + J (+ J + J + ...)
His regular shot is too slow to regenerate it's bullets. To blow close-med range an enemy at once with regular shot,
he needs to use more energy to regenerate it's bullets fastly. He can shoot 4 bullets without fill his energy to his weapon.
Good to attack an enemy in front of him when he(enemy) run or walk to him.
POISON BUSTER (34mp + 34mp)
A when jump (+ A)
He will shoot a regular bullet than can make enemy who had touch it get some stomachache.
Good to technique to make derax can Catch enemy.
PUSH FORCE (50 mp)
J when fall
He will shoot POISON BUSTER when he fall with med power to make he fall more far.
Good to add more ranges between an enemy when you fall.
NP: Actually after enemy knock down his opponent(us/our allies), he will flee to make a bit ranges.
MARTIAL ART ROWING (0 mp)
J when lying
He will rowling and jump at same time, then kickng with chi power(this kick can't dodged and knock downing enemies). This technique is learned from his best friend.
BUSTER MODE (40mp > 40mp > 90mp)
D + > + A (> A > A)
He can charge his buster to gain more fire energy to cause a big damage to his enemies.
The bullet can't move diagonal as normal diagonal moving ball because busters power is high that causing it move faastly.
More time to charge the power, more force puch from his weapon to shoot its bullet.
Good to help some allies from med-far range from enemies invade.
SPEED MODE (50mp + ... + ... + ...)
D + > + J
pick his weapon into his back and shoot POISON BUSTER.
He didn't use much energy, but shoot 4 med power POISON BUSTER that causing push him to forward.
Good to flee from enemies. This move can performed when he jumping.
NP: press D to stop shooting.
NP2: try to use at frontway without an enemy.
SWORD MODE (0 mp)
D + ^ + A
Slash enemy and send him to med-far range. This move can performed when he catching an enemy.
Good to blow enemies when you want to use buster to knock them out.
SWORD MODE: ASSASSINATE (0 mp)
Run + A
Run to enemy then charge his power then slashing at good speed to forward then, send them to the sky.
Good to burn flee enemy without mp.
SWORD MODE: PHOENIX SLASH (0 mp)
Dash + A (/ Run + J + A)
Run to enemy then jump then with phoenix style, fly upwards a bit with very short time then slashing at good speed to forward (and downwards of course).
Then down with the air. This move is quite powerful than ASSASSINATE technique.
Good when you want to combat enemy from far. You will surprise him.
>Credits(This is not my real char, this is my friend's flash stick char. So, all credit is at him ^^):
-Special Thanks for Blaz3(Azolla Dhigo Prasetya) to give me permission to make his flash stick animation character at LF2.
-Thanks to all peoples who critised this char.
-MS Paint 2003 Windows XP.
-Thanks to Empire Fantasy to give me the tips
>Idea(need your suggestion, this is good or bad idea):
-When he press jump, he will slash with his sword. When he press defend, he will move a little forward then slash.
-When he freeze, his hp is damaged by 50hp. (if you think this is good idea, help me please! i can't do that T_T)
-When he do flame sword: assasinate and flame sword: phoenix slash, he is invicible. (if you think this is good idea, help me please! i can't do that T_T)
1. D ^ A + D v A + D ^ A + D v A/D v A + D ^ A + D v A + D ^ A + D ^ J + D v J (Cost huge mp total)
2. D ^ J + D v J
3. Super Attack + A + D ^ J
4. Speed Mode + A + A + A + J
v1.00
-Finished and ready for fun ^^(Still clasic and there is a bug at transform ball)
v1.07
-Ice weakness Deleted (so like other when freeze)
-Fire Aura Deleted
-Flade busters on all sprite sheet changed(become more same like the rhg at fluidanims).
-All fire effect became more bright(Changed)
-All bullets became more bright(changed)
-at Sword mode: center of sword became blue turqoise(i don't know what it calls)
-Small pic Changed
v1.14
-sounds was added(only at buster mode i still yet give it sound)
-speed mode changed
-Dance of Dragon deleted and separated became 3 new moves
-Sword mode: Stomatch slash added from Dance of Dragon.
-Sword mode: Shoulder bash added from Dance of Dragon.
-Sword mode: Knock Down added from Dance of Dragon.
-Sword mode: Stomatc Jab added from RHG last derax's enemy's death.
v1.18
-super attack created ^^.
-at sword mode: center of sword's color deleted and added red rose apple shadow at his sword
-Speed mode finished after i read DarkLord's tutorial.
-derax_1 sprite sheet added with 2 new action.
v1.26
-Catching ability when run deleted(actually i only testing ab catching frame, but i forget to delete it again)
-Turning added
-wpoint at all frames were fixed.
-Combat added
-Buster Mode: Internal Explosion added
-Sprite Sheet 3 added (derax_2)
-Forgotten Flade Description was added(i forgot it XP)
-All sound is fixed(YAAY!!)
v1.27
-Speed Mode Fixed
All you need is serve sir.
NP: maybe if you fight him as computer, you will beat him easily because i gave him good abilities at long range, but he will attack you at close range because i use at itr punch frame to make a range between him and his near enemies.
NP2: he can use dash defend too(when running, turn back and press defend)
Shin Hanazumi
The Second Flower of Hanazumi Kazoku
Junior Data Changer
To improve: Improve his sprites.They are just a colored template.Add a few more yellow and orange to make him to looks like a real fire person.Or see this tutorial http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=5718 and other tutorials in tut forum.
When you want to damage him by 50HP, add mp: -5000
To make a frame invicible,delete all bdy tags in that frame (in your case there are several frames).
09-03-2011, 12:15 PM (This post was last modified: 09-04-2011, 07:01 AM by shin hanazumi.)
(09-03-2011, 11:40 AM)empirefantasy Wrote: Very good way of presenting this char :)
To improve: Improve his sprites.They are just a colored template.Add a few more yellow and orange to make him to looks like a real fire person.Or see this tutorial http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=5718 and other tutorials in tut forum.
That's really2 great! XD
but, i very very can't draw, for the face pic, that made by blaze(azolla dhigo prasetya), then to color it weirdly like that, i need to try 10x extra hard. For me, coloring like at first post is hard.
If anyone can help me, i would be very happy ^^
(09-03-2011, 11:40 AM)empirefantasy Wrote: When you want to damage him by 50HP, add mp: -5000
I know i must do that, but that's not work, please help me --'
this is the dc
like that isn't it?
Ne, ne, ne...
Blaz3 was released real derax at fluidanims...
so, i will update this derax became like the fluidanims.
Link fluidanims'es at first post ^^
---> Little edit: now you can see flade at the small pic at first post
Little update at sprites:
Flade 3x much better!! (not completed)
09-05-2011, 06:09 AM (This post was last modified: 09-05-2011, 11:44 AM by shin hanazumi.)
~Little Updates:
>Datas:
-Ice weakness Deleted (so like other when freeze)
-Fire Aura Deleted
>Sprites:
-Flade busters on all sprite sheet changed(become more same like the rhg at fluidanims).
-All fire effect became more bright(Changed)
-All bullets became more bright(changed)
-at Sword mode: center of sword became blue turqoise(i don't know what it calls)
-Small pic Changed
~Soon:
>Sprites:
-Speed mode(flade buster sprite) changed(become more same like the rhg at fluidanims).
-Speed mode(hand sprite) changed(become more realistic: so, derax put his flade at his back and start flying. The 'old mine' is: he shoot backwards to make he fly).
>Datas:
-Same sound effect like the rhg at fluidanims.
>Other:
-Logo like my davit-long's logo.
~Apologize:
-Sorry about derax colored template sprite, maybe i only can change the flade busters, so sorry for the bodies.
-Sorry about 'over effect' sprite when he slashing(i follow the rhg. It has 'over effect too' but in a short time too)
-Sorry about not self creatifitation(i only move derax from rhg to LF2) and not improve him with my style(of course, like dragon dance, maybe i will delete it when i have a time).
-Sorry if i presenting with too much hide contents(spoiler XP) because if i not hide them, that will slow the loading time.
Greetz
(NP: new screenshoot will appear at my second post agter this)
Here's the Screenshots:
RAPID BUSTER (17mp + 34mp + 34mp + 34mp > 17mp + 34mp + 34mp + 34mp > ...)
A + J (+ J + J + ...)
His regular shot is too slow to regenerate it's bullets. To blow close-med range an enemy at once with regular shot,
he needs to use more energy to regenerate it's bullets fastly. He can shoot 4 bullets without fill his energy to his weapon.
Good to attack an enemy in front of him when he(enemy) run or walk to him.
POISON BUSTER (34mp + 34mp)
A when jump (+ A)
He will shoot a regular bullet than can make enemy who had touch it get some stomachache.
Good to technique to make derax can Catch enemy.
PUSH FORCE (50 mp)
J when fall
He will shoot POISON BUSTER when he fall with med power to make he fall more far.
Good to add more ranges between an enemy when you fall.
NP: Actually after enemy knock down his opponent(us/our allies), he will flee to make a bit ranges.
MARTIAL ART ROWING (0 mp)
J when lying
He will rowling and jump at same time, then kickng with chi power(this kick can't dodged and knock downing enemies). This technique is learned from his best friend.
BUSTER MODE (40mp > 40mp > 90mp)
D + > + A (> A > A)
He can charge his buster to gain more fire energy to cause a big damage to his enemies.
The bullet can't move diagonal as normal diagonal moving ball because busters power is high that causing it move faastly.
More time to charge the power, more force puch from his weapon to shoot its bullet.
Good to help some allies from med-far range from enemies invade.
SPEED MODE (50mp + ... + ... + ...)
D + > + J
pick his weapon into his back and shoot POISON BUSTER.
He didn't use much energy, but shoot 4 med power POISON BUSTER that causing push him to forward.
Good to flee from enemies. This move can performed when he jumping.
NP: press D to stop shooting.
NP2: try to use at frontway without an enemy.
SWORD MODE (0 mp)
D + ^ + A
Slash enemy and send him to med-far range. This move can performed when he catching an enemy.
Good to blow enemies when you want to use buster to knock them out.
SWORD MODE: ASSASSINATE (0 mp)
Run + A
Run to enemy then charge his power then slashing at good speed to forward then, send them to the sky.
Good to burn flee enemy without mp.
SWORD MODE: PHOENIX SLASH (0 mp)
Dash + A (/ Run + J + A)
Run to enemy then jump then with phoenix style, fly upwards a bit with very short time then slashing at good speed to forward (and downwards of course).
Then down with the air. This move is quite powerful than ASSASSINATE technique.
Good when you want to combat enemy from far. You will surprise him.
09-06-2011, 09:49 AM (This post was last modified: 09-06-2011, 09:51 AM by shin hanazumi.)
Sorry for my late rep. Because of my b**** lil sis and mom want to use the internet 2 times. at morning(6am-12am) and afternoon(12am-6pm). (I very2 mad now >)
>Little updates:
-sounds was added(only at buster mode i still yet give it sound)
-speed mode changed
-Dance of Dragon deleted and separated became 3 new moves
-Sword mode: Stomatch slash added from Dance of Dragon.
-Sword mode: Shoulder bash added from Dance of Dragon.
-Sword mode: Knock Down added from Dance of Dragon.
-Sword mode: Stomatc Jab added from RHG last derax's enemy's death.
>Soon:
-Buster mode's sounds
-Speed mode combo move(like the rhg ^^. But still need help for new catching frame)
-All Levels Charge busters transformation to buster 1 level down from it when hit by punch or other ball fix(Need help, i was opointed that and work succesfully but, when the new ball should hit enemy or other balls, it only through them)
-Logo like my 'Davit'-Long (still create it)
-Buster mode: Blast Explosion
>Need Help:
-Super Attack's picture
-ball transforming level
SPEED MODE (50mp + ... + ... + ...)
D + > + J
put flade into his back and fly with flade's power.
Good to flee from enemies. This move can performed when he jumping.
Controls:
-press D to stop.
-press A to attack.
-press J to turn.
SWORD MODE: UPPER SLASH (120 mp)
D + ^ + J
Slash(with fire) enemy and send him to med-far range. This move can performed when he catching an enemy.
Good to flee from close enemies. When you enemies falling and lying, we have enough time to make a range.
SWORD MODE: KNOCK DOWN (120 mp)
D + v + J
Slash(with fire) enemy and smack enemy's body to the ground. This move can performed when he catching an enemy.
Good to be a counter attack(Q:How? A:Press D when enemy looks like want to attack you from close range, then after his attack dodged succesfully, press v and J)
SWORD MODE: STOMATCH SLASH (60 mp)
D + v + A
Slash enemy's stomatch. This move can performed when he catching an enemy. Before Flade Buster's Sword roll out, you can perform upper slash, knock down, and shoulder bash.
Good to make a combo(like DvA, D^A, DvA, D^A, etc. etc.)
SWORD MODE: SHOULDER BASH (60 mp)
D + v + A
Slash enemy's Shoulder. This move can performed when he catching an enemy. Before Flade Buster's Sword roll out, you can perform upper slash, knock down, and stomatch slash.
Good to make a combo(like D^A, DvA, D^A, DvA etc. etc.)
SWORD MODE: STOMATCH JAB (90mp > 90mp > 180mp)
Catching > D + J + A > A > A
Jab enemy's stomatch then slash it right then down. At this condition, all flade's damage times by 1.5.
Deals big damage ^^.
Shin Hanazumi
The Second Flower of Hanazumi Kazoku
Junior Data Changer
09-08-2011, 08:36 AM (This post was last modified: 09-10-2011, 04:42 AM by shin hanazumi.)
akh, i can't post a little new updates, only one:
super attack created ^^.
Want to test it(at beta)?
only a bit again that will be finish!
so, wait for updates.
Greetz
~Shin
E1: forgot the attachment, you will get the real face pic, readme and all needed file to play
E2: one more forgotten sprite update: at sword mode: center of sword's color deleted and added red rose apple shadow at his sword
one updates again:
Speed mode finished after i read DarkLord's tutorial.
add Credits:
Thanks to DarkLord to understand what mid DC'ers dream move(maybe?)
1. D ^ A + D v A + D ^ A + D v A/D v A + D ^ A + D v A + D ^ A + D ^ J + D v J (Cost huge mp total)
2. D ^ J + D v J
3. Super Attack + A + D ^ J
4. Speed Mode + A + A + A + J
Unupdate bug yet:
>Down Level Shoot
>Buster mode Sounds
Forget: He also can perform dash defend: Dash + < + D(Defend to his running/dash backside)
Shin Hanazumi
The Second Flower of Hanazumi Kazoku
Junior Data Changer
09-10-2011, 10:28 AM (This post was last modified: 09-10-2011, 12:00 PM by shin hanazumi.)
Little updates:
>Catching ability when run deleted(actually i only testing ab catching frame, but i forget to delete it again)
>Turning added
>wpoint at all frames were fixed.
>Combat added
>Buster Mode: nternal Explosion added
>Sprite Sheet 3 added (derax_2)
>derax_1 sprite sheet added with 2 new action.
>All sound is fixed(YAAY!!)
>Forgotten Flade Description was added(i forgot it XP)
>Logo Finished
>DERAX FINISHED!! XD
Screenshoots after this post(if i have much time)
Turning (17 mp)
D when his hand forced by shoot force (or A + D )
When Enemies Invade him at his right and his left, he can turning and shoot again without press his opposite arrow in keyboard.
Good to kill soldiers when he invaded from left and right.
Combat (0mp + 0mp + 0mp + 0mp)
D + J + A (+ A + A + A)
Who was said he can't punching or kicking, actually all stick can punch or kick.
Good to combat enemies at close range without mp.
NP: Actually template is normal stick. So, its all punch and kick damage based on template's.
BUSTER MODE: INTERNAL EXPLOSION (250 mp)
Catching + D > A
Actually this is like last level Charge Bullet, but with more less energy, so it can't Through enemies like the normal last level Charge bullet. (Real: Actually, he isn't shoot anything, only attack with fire)
Good to blow enemy when 1 on 1 fight.
RAPID BUSTER (17mp + 34mp + 34mp + 34mp > 17mp + 34mp + 34mp + 34mp > ...)
A + J (+ J + J + ...)
His regular shot is too slow to regenerate it's bullets. To blow close-med range an enemy at once with regular shot,
he needs to use more energy to regenerate it's bullets fastly. He can shoot 4 bullets without fill his energy to his weapon.
Good to attack an enemy in front of him when he(enemy) run or walk to him.
POISON BUSTER (34mp + 34mp)
A when jump (+ A)
He will shoot a Poison Bullet.
Good to technique to make derax can Catch enemy.
PUSH FORCE (50 mp)
J when fall
He will shoot POISON BUSTER when he fall with med power to make he fall more far.
Good to add more ranges between an enemy when you fall.
NP: Actually after enemy knock down his opponent(us/our allies), he will flee to make a bit ranges.
MARTIAL ART ROWING (0 mp)
J when lying
He will rowling and jump at same time, then kickng with chi power(this kick can't dodged and knock downing enemies). This technique is learned from his best friend.
SWORD MODE: SUPER JAB (0 mp)
This is the super attack, so you know the buttons right?
Anyway, this attack like Assassinate, but he use his sword at front and jab enemieS at close range.
This attack is hard to perform because you must make the enemy stunned. Because of that, i give this attack 100 damage(very good huh?).
Good to damaging enemy in 1 on 1 battles.
NP: just use poison buster to make the enemy stunned OK?
NP2: Combo: + A + D ^ A
Turning (17 mp)
D when his hand forced by shoot force (or A + D )
When Enemies Invade him at his right and his left, he can turning and shoot again without press his opposite arrow in keyboard.
Good to kill soldiers when he invaded from left and right.
Combat (0mp + 0mp + 0mp + 0mp)
D + J + A (+ A + A + A)
Who was said he can't punching or kicking, actually all stick can punch or kick.
Good to combat enemies at close range without mp.
NP: Actually template is normal stick. So, its all punch and kick damage based on template's.
BUSTER MODE: CHARGE (40mp + 40mp + 90mp)
D + > + A (+ A + A)
He can charge his buster to gain more fire energy to cause a big damage to his enemies.
The bullet can't move diagonal as normal diagonal moving ball because busters power is high that causing it move faastly.
More time to charge the power, more force puch from his weapon to shoot its bullet.
Good to help some allies from med-far range from enemies invade.
SPEED MODE: SONIC DASH (50mp + ... + ... + ...)
D + > + J
put flade into his back and fly with flade's power.
Good to flee from enemies. This move can performed when he jumping.
Controls:
-press D to stop.
-press A to attack.
-press J to turn.
NP: Combo: + A + A + A + J(Don't use F6, that can broke this combo)
SWORD MODE: UPPER SLASH (120 mp)
D + ^ + J
Slash(with fire) enemy and send him to med-far range. This move can performed when he catching an enemy.
Good to flee from close enemies. When you enemies falling and lying, we have enough time to make a range.
NP: Combo: + D v J
SWORD MODE: KNOCK DOWN (120 mp)
D + v + J
Slash(with fire) enemy and smack enemy's body to the ground. This move can performed when he catching an enemy.
Good to be a counter attack(Q:How? A:Press D when enemy looks like want to attack you from close range, then after his attack dodged succesfully, press v and J)
SWORD MODE: STOMATCH SLASH (60 mp)
D + v + A
Slash enemy's stomatch. This move can performed when he catching an enemy. Before Flade Buster's Sword roll out, you can perform upper slash, knock down, and shoulder bash.
Good to make a combo(like DvA, D^A, DvA, D^A, etc. etc.)
SWORD MODE: SHOULDER BASH (60 mp)
D + v + A
Slash enemy's Shoulder. This move can performed when he catching an enemy. Before Flade Buster's Sword roll out, you can perform upper slash, knock down, and stomatch slash.
Good to make a combo(like D^A, DvA, D^A, DvA etc. etc.)
SWORD MODE: STOMATCH JAB (90mp + 90mp + 180mp)
Catching + D + J + A + A + A
Jab enemy's stomatch then slash it right then down. At this condition, all flade's damage times by 1.5.
Deals big damage ^^.
SWORD MODE: ASSASSINATE (0 mp)
Run + A
Run to enemy then charge his power then slashing(with fire) at good speed to forward then, send them to the sky.
Good to burn flee enemies without mp.
SWORD MODE: PHOENIX SLASH (0 mp)
Dash + A (/ Run + J + A)
Run to enemy then jump then with phoenix style, fly upwards a bit with very short time then slashing(with fire) at good speed to forward (and downwards of course).
Then down with the air. This move is quite powerful than ASSASSINATE technique.
Good when you want to combat enemy from far to close. You will surprise him.
BUSTER MODE: INTERNAL EXPLOSION (250 mp)
Catching + D > A
Actually this is like last level Charge Bullet, but with more less energy, so it can't Through enemies like the normal last level Charge bullet. (Real: Actually, he isn't shoot anything, only attack with fire)
Good to blow enemy when 1 on 1 fight.
09-11-2011, 08:32 AM (This post was last modified: 09-11-2011, 10:37 AM by shin hanazumi.)
(09-10-2011, 02:20 PM)alphafighters Wrote: Well if its your first character, then its ok. The data is ok for an amateur but truly speaking, the sprites suck and are of poor quality.
My rating :-
7.5/10
You know, i am trying to make a stick char like the real. If i draw it by my self, it will be very thin. Template is a good sprite for me, he isn't too thin and fat, and he had many default picture.
@quality, what's bad, maybe the gif? i know it, i use picasion to create that because i don't have any pic editor program.
@data, hmm, i know it is very amateur data, but if i can say: i only want to Move blaze's derax rhg from flash animation to LF2, so for move like the old Dance of Dragon, it was deleted because that's not based on the rhg.
All your question was answered. Anyway, have you test it?
And, there is Speed Mode Bug, that can't be controllable to up and down, now i have fixed it at first post attachment: (will delete first attachment)
oh yea forget about this: there is some old screenshoot that i can't upload because of my busy time. That screenshoots are sword mode that have turqoise color, sword mode: stomatch jab, sword mode: stomatch slash, sword mode: houlder bash, and sword mode: knock down
Shin Hanazumi
The Second Flower of Hanazumi Kazoku
Junior Data Changer