Little Fighter Empire(funny sketch)

[ossiee]

so my first sketch, i made it now!

LFE (Click to View)

part1 (Click to View)

to be continued.....

part 2 (Click to View)

bla bla bla 44 made: (Click to View)

Error 403- That's the name (Click to View)

[Bla bla bla 44]

Nice one . In the first frame you drew yourself with mustache .

[ossiee]

yeah i played an artist ..... anyway thanks

[Bla bla bla 44]

Anyways will you make more of these. Can't wait for the next one (i want to be in one of your comic's ).

[LutiChris]

Lol, i like the exaggerated facial expressions!
bodies though are kinda awkward in relation to the head
(^a bit too fat and bulgy + static/clingy arms too)
other than technical issues in ur ability to draw, the idea comes across pretty clearly
i like it, do more of these funny little skits!

edit:
just realized, i thought (in the last panel) you were to the left side and...
gad was on the right (but now looking back on tht i was wrong)

you could have made more lines to the side of ur guy to show that he moved quickly + dust @ bottom
and more exaggerated facial expression like u did with the others
i would have liked to seen Gad looking innocent (5th panel) than what he appeared to be (in his 4rth) > so it's looks more decieving

but like i said, aside from minor mistakes ~i still like it

[ossiee]

part 2 is here..... in the first post!
read it! and coment!
by the way, sorry gad!

[Bla bla bla 44]

HAhaha. I like how you drew me with a happy face and a hat . Please continue drawing these.

[Monolith]

Hello,
I can see that you have some good ideas.
I can't imagine one thing. Why Gad is bad guy, or why is he bad kind.

[ossiee]

Gad is not a bad guy....... its just in the comic's

[Monolith]

I meant, why is he bad guy in your comic's