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[Rep Char]Sukrit [Only Progress]
#1
This character represents me. I used very simple shading style for him. Please check if everything is all right
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#2
I think he could use a belt or some other visual border between pants and shirt.
Other than that it's great. Go and animate it.
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#3
I agree to YinYin, the design is cool and, although simple, distinguishable. Adding a belt will help increasing the overall contrast as well. Also, his left arm (from our perspective: right) seems a pixel or so too long. Nothing that you notice within the very first second but if you want to go all perfect on it, it's something that could be fixed ;)

Keep it up, I'd like to see further progress on this one! Do you have any certain theme for him set yet (ie. what kind of attacks)?
Silverthorn / Blue Phoenix
~ Breaking LFE since 2008 ~

"Freeze, you're under vrest!" - Mark, probably.

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#4
Added a belt and fixed his left hand!
About his moves, he is a combat fighter (no powers like davis, dennis). He will have different types of punches, kicks and combos. If anyone have some ideas about some different kicks and punches, pls let me know but first I shall finish the basic sprites :D
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#5
The third frame comes to an abrupt end, maybe you could balance it out.
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#6
Bigger, more noticeable belt, something like this:
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You have my full support in this project, good luck ;)
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(04-16-2013, 02:38 PM)Marko Wrote:  Bigger, more noticeable belt, something like this:
[Image: vmTuysx.png]

You have my full support in this project, good luck ;)

maybe not, looks akward.



ot so good, since its just quick thing and , y u no just 79x79
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Okay, if you insist to use more then 1 minute for re making belt (still buggy, idc) i dont think so that one dark line is enough for belt
Also fixed "the arm thing" which Blue phoenix has mentioned so this is how it roughly should looks (ur choose, you can make pink belt if you want so, whatever)
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Breathing is good..

please davis, make new one by yourself. This your project!
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(04-16-2013, 04:07 PM)Marko Wrote:  Okay, if you insist to use more then 1 minute for re making belt (still buggy, idc) i dont think so that one dark line is enough for belt
Also fixed "the arm thing" which Blue phoenix has mentioned so this is how it roughly should looks (ur choose, you can make pink belt if you want so, whatever)
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Breathing is good..

please davis, make new one by yourself. This your project!

I mean it looks like that wallet belt thingy or his shirt and it makes him look fat
belt should not stand out as the big part of a char, it should help dealing with contrast with torso and legs part
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#10
Arms fixed in breathing(3 and 4 frame)
@EXG9
Moving the belt would make him look fat! :p
[Image: i311830_3038304.gif]breathing(fixed)
[Image: i311831_3038343.gif]walking
[Image: i311832_3038348.gif]running
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[Image: i311834_stoprunning.PNG]stop running
[Image: 493803jump_PNG.png]jumps
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