Hari's stuff

[The Hari]

I'm going to keep this thread quite active in nearest time. Not necessarily with LF content anymore, but still. Let's hope for the best.

YinYin encounter (Click to View)

[klodasmone]

Suggestion: do a blueish energy ball concentrate thingy on Davis' left hand. Otherwise, I really quite like it. Really.

[MangaD]

Man, I simply love your artwork. Do you have a DeviantArt account or any place where I can download your LF/HF fanart?
I need to add your artwork to my collection!

My Collection (Click to View)

[Conqueror]

Really nice dude
This is only an advice though but i think u should blur it.

[Monolanier]

I believe that you should add blue-green color to trees that are far away

[Lauli]

Yea, the path isn't in the same perspective as the trees, or the other way around (although you could argue that the trees get bigger in the distance, lel). Bandit feels a little big and Davis small, but that could be subjective.
The trees are kinda small, imagine YinYin in an upright position. Would be as tall as the trees.


Pretty cool composition though with foreground, middleground, background; tells the story well.

edit: Oh my, I'm really going all serious with analyzing this picture you did probably just for fun.

[The Hari]

Man, I simply love your artwork. Do you have a DeviantArt account or any place where I can download your LF/HF fanart?

Nope. And I'm not planning anything like this, until I learn muuuuch more.

This is only an advice though but i think u should blur it.

Kinda bad advice.

Well, I was hoping for much more. I'm waiting for more, since this one is clearly not your best job.

Based on what you can say so? Sadly, I'm pretty sure I've never posted anything better.
Thanks for critc anyway.

I believe that you should add blue-green color to trees that are far away

Guess it depends on how do you want to present the forest. I wanted trees to be so dense, that you can't see horizon behind them.



That's the perspective I tried to make. Is it proper?
Grass in the lower right corner and part of trees was messed up. Bandit still is, so I'm not gonna post full size version.

Thanks so much for crictics and advices. I'm not really into correcting finished pictures, but it's still helping me a lot.

[Lauli]

Where did the other picture go?

[YinYin]

arachnophobia

[The Hari]

Corrections.
Right hand is really messed up.
Also I think, I rather keep my works for myself, unless it'll be something related to LF.