phoenixlady sprite

[Ascor]

Totaly agree with bp use photofiltre or something other programm
btw:
I AM most of my time at lfe

[lf2TimmE1]

ok..thx for feedback ...and here is the new more lf2 styled version: http://www.savefile.com/files/1908394
P.S. she is now named as phoenixgirl

[Ascor]

looks better then the old version but you need a bit more powerfull colours
and give her a bh cause not in every position the hairs are in this position

[Silverthorn]

please, do me a favor and use some image host instead of posting savefile-links.... makes it easier & faster for us to rate, give criticism, etc.


Again, the shading is strange. I can't really see where you put the light source in order to set the highlights/shadows. I think, you need to put a little circle representing your light source into a corner (just for spriting, though). Although, it's just a dot, it makes correct shading much easier (at least for me)

[Hypermodder]

Yes, here are some guys who dontwanna download that stuff.


Therefore you can use image-tags!

Code:

[IMG][/IMG]

Upload your stuff and put the pic's url between the imagetags.

[zxcv11791]

Who cares if its not LF2 style? If you want to do something different then go for it.

I would suggest putting a bra on your phoenix girl, and you need a lot of work shading.

-the light off the legs are going in different directions
-light of the arms are going in different directions as well
-chest area is too dark in comparison to the legs and arms
-her shorts/panties are shaded very oddly. Don't use stripes unless you're going for a metalic shade.
-make the tail go behind the her legs instead of in between

[lf2TimmE1]

here is the new improved version of phoenixgirl...and u don't have to download anymore^^ http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/6739/...irlhc5.png

[Ascor]

looks better now
but she still needs a bh

[lf2TimmE1]

she won't get a bh because i don't want her to wear a bh
P.S. she has magical hair which ever will hide her boobs^^

[zxcv11791]

Hmmm, it's LF2 SPRITES SECTION, HELLO!
If he is publishing sprites in this section they should be LF2 Styled, don't you think?

Oh I'm sorry, I must have skipped over the rules that say all sprites in this section must be LF2 styled.

Who says that LF2 has to use the same style sprites? Its seems a little unoriginal don't you think? But if you're so bent on following the norm and incapable of originality, then go ahead and flame everyone for not conforming to your ways.



About the sprite. Make the lightest part of the arms both on the top. And for the chest, make the inner most part the lightest. And it woulden't hurt to shade her breasts too