The Beginning of the End [Parts 1, 2, 3]

[Divisor]

You know, I always find it interesting how you can write chapters about as long as the chapters of other guys with almost only talking. If you had some descriptions and insights (those could really be useful from time to time) in it, you'd get close to usual chapters in books.

Actually, I designed this story to be analitical, meaning that you discover the past through the dialgoues and retrospectives of the people involved. That's why I kept the descriptions to a minimum, because I'd like the reader to "read" the character's personality through his actions, in this case, the dialogue. Oh well, I guess a bit more non-converational elements wouldn't hurt.

There's alot of stories involving NY going on here lol. Is it because 9/11 was yesterday?

But seriously...good story dude.

Lol no, I have started this one ages ago, but only recently got the will to finish it. It has nothing to do with 9/11

And thanks, I appreciate it