Poll: Who shall be crowned the king of the tournament?
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bashscrazy [Image: aRSkp.png]
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Whaat [Image: anthro2.png]
81.82%
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Official Sprite Tournament
(06-26-2011, 02:26 PM)bashscrazy Wrote:  Damn, my sprite doesn't have a chance against yours. GJ

I hate to say things like that, but I have to agree with you on that one :p

If you have the time, will, patience, and whatever else, you might want to redo your sprite. The concept itself is quite nice, but the execution is not really satisfying. Try using a different pose; a pose where the dragon looks intimidating as if his pure look can rip his opponents apart.

Then, about the design; the shirt looks okay, but the pants somehow don't really fit. It's as if they're hanging around his belly, for the sake of having them in there. At the same time, the legs look awfully weak. Like if they're not made to carry that body. A pair of wings might be helpful as well, but those are optional only. Plus, I wonder why he's not falling over xD

Once again, would be great if you could make this happen. Push yourself!

Also, @Whaat, this one's probably your best so far; really nice work! Only thing that I would've added in your place would be a fin at the tail. Other than that, I don't see anything worth ranting about. Keep it up!
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well... BP said what I had in mind regarding Bash's
As For Whaat, make him ride the waves! He's the god of the seas, so make us feel the might of it. had you not mentioned it was Poseidon, I really thought it was just a normal merman. (it just occurred to me that the female merpeople are called mermaids, so males are called... merbutlers...?)
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Gentlemen, since I don't think bash is going to change his entry, reset the poll and let's see who takes home the trophy.
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Suddenly, HARPY
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See? i bet you werent expecting me to post anything. Ha. Showed you.
Oh wells, i havent sprited in ages, and MAN did i feel good to start again.
An i hope i got the boobs right this time. You guys always have a problem with the boobs i draw, but this time im pretty confident that i've improved.
Oh, Klod is banned? 2 weeks?

Basch, Whaat, would you like me to reset the poll? Or are you gonna change your entries?
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Well one thing i don't like it,right hand have 5 fingers and on left hand i just see 4 fingers.But still its cool
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(06-30-2011, 01:45 AM)Alectric Wrote:  Basch, Whaat, would you like me to reset the poll? Or are you gonna change your entries?
I'm okay with my own entry.
Bash?
Might be back, might be not :^) anyways awesome to see you guys again!
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Yeah sure go for it. I'm in the hosptial can't change my entry plus I'm too lazy to change it anyways.
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(06-30-2011, 01:45 AM)Alectric Wrote:  Suddenly, HARPY
[Image: AIs65.png]


See? i bet you werent expecting me to post anything. Ha. Showed you.
Oh wells, i havent sprited in ages, and MAN did i feel good to start again.
An i hope i got the boobs right this time. You guys always have a problem with the boobs i draw, but this time im pretty confident that i've improved.
Oh, Klod is banned? 2 weeks?

Basch, Whaat, would you like me to reset the poll? Or are you gonna change your entries?

The boobs are fine, but now that the boobs are so eye-catching the terrible lack of anatomical details in the areas around it become painfully obvious. the shoulders and the collar area looks so much like blobs of goo right now, even though I see an attempt at highlighting the collar bones. It just lacks that holistic touch.
Hope you don't mind the somewhat rough and vague critique.

And Klod is banned? for what this time?
Which reminds me, we probably should have some feature that explains why a member is banned and other details, maybe in his profile or something. Or do we already have that and I'm just foolishly unawares?
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etiquette, as always. :p
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Go and vote for the spriter you think should be crowned for the first sprite tournament!
Ill even draw up a crown for you ;D YEAH RIGHT

No multiple choice 4 u! We need a definite winner this time!
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