Sonic Boom's Sprites!

[qwertz143]

i love him
but it would be much better if you enhanced the expression on his face
that'll make look like he's showing lots of attitude
ie make the frown little darker and viewable...

[Sonic Boom]

Thanks Qwertz!
I think I like that expression already and I don't want him to look with lots of attitude...

[Monolith]

i made it to show what ou done wrong
right shoulder is to hight
chest like a bricks
arms have strange structure

[Siegvar]

Agree with monolith except the arms. if its muscular enough, those contours represent perspective drawn curves of the muscles, and may be a tiny bit deformed but its negligible as it enhances the effect when viewed at normal zoom levels.

However, I'm guessing you didn't think that much and just got lucky... while possibly referencing Apoc's character Heat for the pose, right down to using the gauntlets and fingers base and even the pants.

I've nothing against that though, its good for practice.

However... you also shrunk the legs even more than Apoc did with Heat. At this point your character is terribly stunted.


Anyway, its much better than your previous ones, even if its only coz you used a good reference. Keep going.

[Sonic Boom]

@Sieg
Yeah I used heat as a reference so sorry for not telling it earlier as I forgot about that...
and I made those legs as I wanted to make my sprite look like he is wearing it a little bit low vest...

here are the two sprites:
1st is the one by me and 2nd is heat by apoc...
aren't they having their pants at the same level?
@Monolith
Fixed those shoulders!

[Monolith]

@Sieg
Yeah I used heat as a reference so sorry for not telling it earlier as I forgot about that...
and I made those legs as I wanted to make my sprite look like he is wearing it a little bit low vest...

here are the two sprites:
1st is the one by me and 2nd is heat by apoc...
aren't they having their pants at the same level?
@Monolith
Fixed those shoulders!

better fix those arms

[Siegvar]

@Sieg
Yeah I used heat as a reference so sorry for not telling it earlier as I forgot about that...
and I made those legs as I wanted to make my sprite look like he is wearing it a little bit low vest...

here are the two sprites:
1st is the one by me and 2nd is heat by apoc...
aren't they having their pants at the same level?
@Monolith
Fixed those shoulders!

Oh no, no worries about the not telling. That's not an issue since its just a reference for practice.

Anyway about the legs, its all relative. Your body is bigger than in Apoc's so the ratio has been reduced.
Where Heat's legs are about as long as his body...
Your character's body (measured from shoulder to hip) is longer than his legs (from hip to feet.)
So it looks like your character has very short legs.

[Sonic Boom]

Here is a collab sprite by me and xlittlebob252!

hope you all like him!

[Sonic Boom]

Ummm.... A new sprite!
He is a imaginative sprite for my fellow friend Electric Shock or Dark Sagitario or whatever it is...

Hope you all like him!

[qwertz143]

yes i do