Bla bla's sprites

[Dominate]

still hes eating his clothes

[chase123]

The sprite just seems a little too rushed upon.The hair need a better shape with better shading,right now I am only seeing one colour on the hair,the skin colour needs to be changed,you could use an lf2 character for the skin colour.Mouth needs to be more defined,check for lf2 characters for reference,the hands look tiny and the legs look jointed,try to separate them from each other.The shoes are okay.
Sorry for the harsh criticism,but this is for constructing you as a good spriter.

[Gad]

Your getting better and better. But there is still one problem - shaping the size. Your body looks oversized usually. Try spending more time to get proper shape.

[Bla bla bla 44]

I've made a new sprite. I made a mouth (i hope you can see it), i separatet the legs and i tried to make another type of hair but almost no shading. SO here it is:

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Here's another one. The Lolipop man:

[Gad]

Still not enough contrast in shading.
Workover the shape. But you're getting better.

[Monolith]

nice,but try to make contrast in shading like in my those sprites

[Whaat]

Well, you have really been trying hard and made many sprites, so i decided to give you little tip D:
Since picture tells more than thousand words, you should check this:
Your sprite
My version of the same sprite
I did some little changes there and there, and your job should be finding them so you understand what you should fix :/ Try finding these:
Neck, more forehead (not flat head), thinner arms, shading and ''longer'' legs

[Bla bla bla 44]

Thanks for all the tips. I made a new one . Here it is:

[Monolith]

Good one,but fix where legs plug in to upper body part

[The Lost Global Mod]

wow, pretty good, mate.
You are getting there, however some last hints:
- pay attention to the arms and hands, in your sprites there is no real significant difference between the hand and the rest of the arm. you need to make some sort of clutched fist. Look at lf2 chars for reference
- Your faces all look a bit too fat to me, use more shadow (or remove some at the end of face) and reduce the highlighted part of the face to make it look thiner.
- The ear should be played a bit more up generally and try to keep it more roundish and let at least grow some hair out of the top of the ear grow to make it look more natural.
- experiment more with the shadows, you are getting the hang of it

I would give you some visuals, but i have no mouse at hand so I can't really do any better right now