Bla bla's sprites

[ossiee]

looks better, now try improve the hair a little

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I changed the hair a little bit. Here it is:

[Silverthorn]

You seem to have problems with defining the actual shape of the head. I suggest drawing a bald-headed guy to actually get that one down correctly. Especially if you're new to spriting, this is extremely useful in actually finding out where the hair should go and where not.

As of now, it just looks like everything is glued to the forehead, like a shield or so.

[Bla bla bla 44]

Here's a new one. It's bald man. Also it's pretty simple. Here it is:

[Bla bla bla 44]

OK here's another one. I'm not good at effects. Here it is:

[bashscrazy]

rather than making a billion sprites
maybe you should keep fixing one sprite till you improve then make a new sprite
this sprite's legs are much too small
legs should be longer than the body...
this sprites legs are half the size of the body.

[ossiee]

yeah bashscrazy is right hes legs are small, try making them bigger and the upper body smaller
post it here and we will tell you what to improve, shading is nice keep it up

[Bla bla bla 44]

rather than making a billion sprites
maybe you should keep fixing one sprite till you improve then make a new sprite

I was doing that and i am doing this now. But no one comented on the old ones so i made new ones.
About the sprite. I lifted the legs a bit. Here it is:

[The Lost Global Mod]

I myself never really learnt from explanations, so I hope you don't mind:



I took your sprite as base and drew over it.
Your biggest problem is, that you don't give yourself enough space for certain body parts. such as feet and the head. Both feel kinda squeezed. The end of your hair is where the head should end. Which means at least 3-4 pixels additional to that is still hair.
Another thing, you leave out additional shading, clothing specific such as here the coat.
I am not good at effects, so yeah I can't help you out with that.
Another thing is that you are not giving enough shadow for some parts. Like the arms, which make them look thick. just look at my (drawn) right arm and yours. I hope you see the difference.

Hope i didn't hurt your pride or anything, good luck!

P.s: i just realized how much that sprite of mine sucks as well. D:

[Bla bla bla 44]

I'm done remaking that sprite. I made another one. I tried to make muscles but not very good. Here it is: