Revamped Sprites (52%)

[ossiee]

awesome sprite luti shading is great and everytihng is good.
but this: looks wrong to me, great sprite.

[prince_freeza]

He is without any portion b/w legs?

its called a crotch, and yes good point.

[Gad]

Holy Moly. It's the end already?!

btw. gr8 sprite Luti

[LutiChris]

oh shoot, before we put up the poll
ossiee! those 2 sprites are not the same, it's not fusion thread :P
tell me which one to use, btw i guess that gives u guys some more time if ur planning on ur entry

[Sonic Boom]

@ossie
I said The same thing to Luti before u but after seeing it overall...
I guess that belt is some kinda hanging on waste as a style so its kinda right

[LutiChris]

Alright guys, sorry for the delay there...
Any mod care to do the honers for us?

Sonic Boom's > Entry's
--> ossiee
--> Bla bla bla 44
--> JoHo15
-> erbuslayer
> mundvoll_
-> Gad
---> lemonhead
>> prince_freeza
-> Whaat
Apocalipsis
> Monolith
> LutiChris

[ossiee]

yeay!.... great! now plz someone update the poll!
uhhh..... why am i so happy..... i couldnt use the last sprite i made
but its ok, thanks luti!

[Gad]

Ok.
Let's do some of cc.

ossiee (Click to View)

You still have to work on shaping. Character is a bit out of proportions and the natural shape of human. His legs aren't well connected with the torso. I also find the design itself boring. Shading is the best thing that you can do by now, so just keep practising.
Can't vote for you, since I see some problems with this sprite.

bla bla bla... (Click to View)

This is one of your best sprites. Although the shape of his feet is little weird. You also need to work on the shading - especially the hair.
The last thing that I don't like much is this 'energy effect'.
Can't vote for you, since other entries are better.

JoHo15 (Click to View)

Well. Nice composition, creative and simply, but good shaded.
I don't like two things:
• proportions - it's a giant comparing to the other - while he's kneeling he's same size as other standing
• stones - they are just not shaded properly.
Voted for you.

Erbuslayer - not worth commenting, it's just a little reedit.

Mundvoll (Click to View)

While I don't like the shape and shading of his 'demon' part and the hair I completly adore the rest. This glowing effect somehow makes me love the sprite.
Can't find any exact misstake of the author.
Voting for yah.

Gad aka Myself (Click to View)

The sprite may be kinda boring, but I like it because of the expression. Can't find any problem in sprite itself.
Voting for myself, since I find it as good as others.

lemonhead (Click to View)

As I said earlier - there are some problems with shading.
I still like this sprite because of its expression.
Voted for you.

Pf (Click to View)

I guess you know what is wrong with this sprite - it's just not cool enough . The only thing that I like is the hair - as always yours is sweet.
Can't vote for you though - I was been expecting something 'bigger'.

Whaat (Click to View)

This is pretty. Though proportions aren't really LFish I love this sprite. Especially how you've drawn his fist.
Voting!

Apoc (Click to View)

Already said - arms are too long.
Beside that - amazing as usual. Nice expression and great shading.
Voted.

Mono (Click to View)

I don't like your sprite, but this time you got me. Good sprited position of chara clears the way to the vote.
As said - voted.

LC (Click to View)

The only problem for me is: "Not lf2 styled" - as usual. Completly other proportions (more humanlike).
But I adore your spriting style and find the shading excellent.
Voting.

Looks like this time we've got some really nice sprites.

[ossiee]

thanks for critics Gad:P i think my last one was best, but i couldnt use it and i didnt have enough time to make new one!

[ossiee]

hey luti.... isnt it time for new one? after the sprite theme contest is ended...