Revamped Sprites (52%)

[ossiee]

good entry joho15.... i like the shading very much, but the shading on the skirt not very good and her legs are too small

i made a new entry, dont now if it will be my last......
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exg9, i looked at some muscles anatom and didnt get it.... could someone explain me more......

[Bla bla bla 44]

Here's my entry. Made it from scratch - no base:
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I could fix some things but imo it's the best revamp i made
EDIT: I thought 35% means in 158/158 :S.

[hell fightter]

WHOAH WHOAH WHOAH WHEN DOES IT HAPPEND OAO
i was bussy with 2 works and university and i missed my part! i have to find time and take a part finally >____<

[ossiee]

@bla bla bla 44, its the best sprite you made, if you do sprites this way your sprites are gonna improve

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EDITome things are wierd in my sprite so i fixed it:
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[Sonic Boom]

Hmmm...
@ossiee
You are doing ur shading good.
U just need to think that if ur sprite is looking weird or not...
Ur sprite is kinda not having some proportions. [Try to fix it and see other Lf2 sprites if u still don't get it]
And for hair they look very good but smaller to proportion to that head.
And ur sprite is lacking a neck so add that too.

[ossiee]

well, thanks, i will do that and fix it...... i will make it better in all the things you said and improve
thanks a lot!

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EDIT:well, a little fix- neck, muscles(looking at deep's muscles) maybe it is better:

btw, srry for dirty pixels i just lost the sprite and coopied it from here and i tried to clean and that is what left.....

[Sonic Boom]

Here is my entry...
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Hope u like it...

[ossiee]

realy good! i dont know why in contests my sprites are realy sucks!
great entry sonicboom, i realy like the shading and the skeleton idea..... good luck in contest, and how is my update of my sprite?
here it is again:
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[Sonic Boom]

Wow much better...
His Left Hand is maybe a bit fat from the wrist area try to fix it and he will be fine.
Nice entry

[ossiee]

well it was fater befor this and i made it thiner, but if it still fat i will fix it...... thanks a lot sonicboom! you are the best