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Well, it's better now.:) Just take a look at his right arm. It looks like it got stuck into his body, making his right shoulder invisible. Make sure that you make his right shoulder properly. Just remove the dirty pixels from your sprite. You are improving your spriting. Keep it up.
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Its better,its better.Keep spriting in that size or you can still experimenting in some bigger if you want!
For sprites:hmm its better little wierd but i suggesting you to spriting sprites first in normal positions/pose(if you know what i think).
Pf donig sprites in normal positions so why would you spriting it in some other(sry pf for using you like example(maybe to often)).
If you saw my sprites then you know my first okay sprites.I mean on the Wynne(revamped firen).You should do somethings like that.Revamp some orginal Lf2 sprites(of caurse the first 4 frames)
SRY for spelling mistake i just hurry!!!
EDIT:
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/thread-7162-page-3.html
THIs is that Wynne
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My suggestion would be study some tutorials on LF2-anatomy. came out a little too thin, so is . On the other hand, looks a bit too fat.

It's good to see you creating sprites from scratch, but I really advise you to keep at least a reference next to your pic, so you can quickly see if the sprite gets disproportioned. Also, it can be a helpful guide in adding shadows ;)
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I forgot to say you...there is lot of dirty pixel around char :)
In future earse it!!!
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Well, I think that the best way to leraning about LF2 proportions is drawing on original characters. This mean on new layer draw just outline and on another layer you draw proper sprite. Most of tutorials show that way. Drawing from scratch isn't good idea for beginning. Wait! I teaching you, although I also must learn this! So... better I'll go reading something about anatomy ;) Good luck.

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Here's a new sprite: ( I revamped Boomer from Redakai: Conquer the Kairu )
[Image: 41932537.png]
It's wrong proported so i didn't even bother to resize it. I want to know is it shaded good?
[Image: double-jump-YinYin-base-1.gif]
This is an inspiration from:
-YinYin's Character Development guide, to be more specific i took one of those bases.
-Urban Rivals' clan Skeelz, I took their uniform
I hope it's good. ^^
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There are some dirty pixels around your sprite. Shading is nice. You need to improve to make it good. Just try to curve your shading, don't make your shading straight. This makes your shading look better. :) It's good that you're practising. Keep up the good work. :)
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Shade the inner clothes too.
I recommend you look and observe the sprites and shading of LF2. Plus, look at some tut like PF's "how to detailed your sprite". ;)
Good luck.
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Yours sprites looks like you wanna do them in record time.You need time to do good sprites,after speed will come with experiens...erase dirty pixels...when you doing your own hand or somethings else look at length of hands...(yours right hand is shorter and thicker but need to be little bigger!!!)
...In last few sprites belt?(stomach) is to much down!!...
Somethings good...
Face its solid, good, pretty good for you...(the best face of you till now)
Shade its good but legs look weird.I dont know why! :(
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There is lot of more things...just remember sprite it slowly (DONT HURRY)
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Uhm face is good? srsly there is a lot to improve...
He got no ear, hair looks like pommes frites to me :/
Furthermore the face expression is good right now but pleaaase, since when are nose and mouth drawn with black colour?

Hm sounds pretty negative now but still hope it helps..
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