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G4F Chronicles II: The LF Empire (Season 1)
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Not bad, but no fighting! X(

This chapters are cool, but they are not very obsessing! (like the first one)
we should start fighting now! :p

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^ not exatly, we should let the story set in first. after that we are gonna have a LOT of time to fight
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(09-25-2008, 12:40 PM)Hypermodder Wrote:  Not bad, but no fighting! X(

This chapters are cool, but they are not very obsessing! (like the first one)
we should start fighting now! :p

v agree?

I guess my part could count as fighting, only it's a bit of a stretch :D
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OMG, the epic and surprising chapter four is released

Chapter Four

Lightning scorched the skies over the LFE Castle as the heavy storm continued its downpour over the land. But it wasn’t the storm that everyone was worried about...
The crowd quickly began panicking as Noir disappeared in an instant. Lord Razen looked around for him as did Don Giovanni and the others. Cirno however was trying to keep the crowd calm as the people became restless. But matters only grew worse as a soldier came in from the outside and shouted out loud.
“Lord Razen, the Castle is under attack!”
Lord Razen, the Imperial Generals, and the G4Forians ran toward the main hall entrance to see countless Dark Rebellion members coming over the main battle walls of the LFE Castle and there weren’t enough soldiers on the fortifications to stop them from coming. KadajNoir stood on top of the wall with two cloaked members behind him. Blue-Phoenix was also standing next to Noir as well.
“That bastard!” BreD exclaimed. “I knew he couldn’t be trusted. I’ll make him take back the words he said about the Domain!”
With that said, BreD dashed out with Sylvan chasing after him trying to stop him.
“Is he here yet?” Blue-Phoenix asked.
“He will be shortly,” Noir answered. “Azriel will be arriving here soon as well. Everything is going according to the plan. You should leave now if you don’t want any trouble. There will be a lot of people after you.”
“I’m fully aware of that,” Blue-Phoenix responded.
“Take them down!”
On Don Giovanni’s command, a storm of the Empire’s soldiers poured throughout all sections of the Castle. They began their battle with the invading Dark Rebellion. A cluster of Dark Rebellion soldiers came rushing towards Razen himself, but Paddy crashed down upon them from above. Drawing his two golden swords he began slaying soldiers left and right. Lauli joined him and began rushing enemies with a barrage of fist flurries.
“Finally I get to make up for your mistake back at the prison,” Paddy said slashing a nearby enemy.
“Let’s not start that again,” Lauli said etching a small smile as he threw up his hands and slew a soldier with a deadly combination of punches.
“Oh it’s too late now,” Paddy confirmed. “I’m going to correct that mistake, but you’ll be here to learn from it.”
“Whatever let’s just kill these jokers already!” Lauli exclaimed and with that the two rushed at the next bombardment of soldiers.
BreD made a large leap over an incoming horde of Dark Rebellion soldiers and he landed on the wall containing Blue-Phoenix.
“I knew it you traitorous bastard!” BreD immediately commented. “I should’ve killed you back when you made that comment about our Domain!”
“You still have the chance,” Blue-Phoenix began, “But it’s a very slight one.”
“We’ll see!” BreD shouted as he dashed at BP.
“Cirno, where is Noir?” Don Giovanni asked as he ordered more of his troops to protect the main hall area.
“I don’t know!” Cirno responded defending against a loose soldier. He conjured up a spell and blasted the soldier into the south wall. “It’s freakin’ hectic out here! Who is maintaining the safety of the people?”
Dome dropped from off the main hall building’s roof. “They are being evacuated to the safe area. I.G. Sinow is down there protecting them.”
A question quickly popped into Cirno’s head, “Hey where is Lord Razen?”

On top of the LFE Castle’s main structure building, Lord Razen and KadajNoir stood face to face with each other.
“You do realize that you do not have the power to destroy me, correct?” KadajNoir asked the Empire’s ruler.
“Power is only as strong as the one who wields it,” Razen exclaimed.
“Don’t spout that wisdom nonsense to me,” Noir responded. “If anything it should be the other way around. You don’t have the power to stop me or anyone in the Dark Rebellion for that matter.”
“You don’t know if I do or don’t,” Razen said. “You haven’t even seen me fight before. So there’s no way you could know how powerful I really am. I did not become the Empire’s ruler for no reason, Noir.”
Noir was silent for the moment. “Then show me, O’ Great and Fearless Leader!”
“I will do more than show you!” Lord Razen declared as he put both of his palms together and aimed them directly at Noir. As they were fixed on Noir, Razen’s palms began glowing and a symbol began forming within.

~

Mailliw came down hard with his beam sword. However the Mage, Dazzapizza, had created a large dome of shielding energy. Electrical sparks began shooting every which way as Mailliw’s beam sword continued to crash down upon the energy shield. Marshall’s eyes flashed and he ran towards the shield and, with his fist glowing with a yellowish energy, he punched through the energy shield and shattered it instantly.
Dazzapizza, and the two cloaked members behind him, leapt back a few yards to maintain their distance from them.
“I’ll punish you for that, Imperial Scum!” the Mage declared.
“You will try and that’s about it,” Marshall declared back at him.
Mailliw still wasn’t finished and he ran head-on towards the three. Drahcir followed closely behind. Silva landed next to Marshall and stood their ground. Drahcir took the cloaked man to the left of Dazzapizza and Marshall and Silva took the right one. Mailliw went after the Mage by himself.
Marshall and Silva tag-teamed the cloaked fighter who was a lot stronger than he was letting on. As he ran towards the enemy, Marshall created a large ball of energy and threw it at the cloaked man. The figure kicked it back at Marshall which smashed right into his face, felling him. Silva was caught off-guard and the cloaked figure immediately attacked him. The figure slammed his knee into back of Silva’s head, downing him instantly.
Drahcir’s opponent also had a bladed weapon but it was withstanding the heavy temperatures of Drahcir’s beamed weapon. The two flashed their blades at each other, hitting and missing at different times. Drahcir attempted to go for the kill with a swipe of his beamed sword. However, the cloaked figure ducked and he thrust his sword towards the position of Drahcir’s stomach. The lieutenant barely avoided the point of his opponent’s sword as he twisted his body and countered with another slashing attempt with his beam sword. He slashed through the cloak but his opponent had escaped by abandoning it. The figure was revealed. Drahcir paused until the person, who was faced away from him, showed his face.
Silva staggered upright with a trickle of blood pouring from his head where the cloaked being kneed him. “Damn you!”
“You will never defeat me.” the cloaked man grunted cockily.
“So the hooded villain speaks,” Silva said. “Who are you?”
The figure stopped for a moment and slowly raised his left hand towards his cloak. As he was just about to remove his cover, a large bolt of purple lightning shot down from the clouded skies and completely ceased everyone else’s fighting. The bolt of lightning struck the cloaked man and tore through him. All of the electricity surged through the cloaked figures body and completely charred his skin. Once the bolt ceased, what used to be the cloaked personae disintegrated to nothing but ash.
Silva was wide-eyed.
“Oh no, we have taken too long!” Dazzapizza said out loud. “Forgive me my master!”
Mailliw stopped in his tracks as he began another charge. He was several feet away from the Mage when another bolt of lightning struck the Mage and killed him instantly. Mailliw was knocked a distance away by the impact of the large bolt of lightning.
“Mailliw!” Drahcir called as he ran to his apprentice.
More lightning began striking random places all over the landscape. Silva ran towards the downed Marshall, grabbed him, and ran for cover behind Dron’s Secondary Wall. Drahcir and Mailliw followed behind Silva. However they were immediately stopped as a large bolt of lightning, far larger than any of the other bolts slammed down into the wall they were running toward and caused a large explosion. The wall toppled and fell onto the main building of Dron.
The four were taken off their feet by the following shockwave and sent several yards back. Silva and Marshall were smashed into a large chunk of the wall which had fallen from the top. They were both knocked unconscious.
Drahcir and Mailliw attempted to go after them but large chunks of debris prohibited them from doing so. Clouds of smoke cluttered their vision. They turned around to the main defensive wall and noticed that it had been destroyed as well and a dark figure was slowly hovering down onto a protruding piece of the higher defensive wall.
“Who are you?” Mailliw asked out loud.
The figure did not say anything. Drahcir took a good look at the man. He wore everything black from his large trench coat to the boots on his feet. His hair was dark and spiked at the top, and his eyes were crimson red. The man drew a sword he had on his back and Drahcir knew that this man did not come to talk. And then it hit him. Drahcir recalled information that his master had given him about a certain individual who would be best to stay clear of.
“I see,” Drahcir said drawing Mailliw’s attention, “My master has told stories about you. You must be the legendary hunter of souls, the Empire’s dark warrior, and the Nami Clan’s leader… Evil Sonidow!”
The figure pointed the tip of his long sword at Drahcir and uttered in a deep and disturbing voice, “Correct.”

~

“Where have you been all this time, Haywire?” Zab asked his friend from the former G4F Domain, NGH (Never-Going-Haywire).
“I’ve been here the whole time,” NGH replied. “I have been waiting for you. We have.”
“We?” Zabobula asked. “Who is we? I only see you here.”
“Look behind you,” Haywire said.
Everyone turned around and, instantly, they were all left speechless. They all had the expression that they couldn’t believe their eyes. In front of them stood an important figure who had been missing for a long time and was now discovered.
Zabobula simply uttered one name, “Robo.”
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WOW amazing! Both chapter 3&4 are outstanding! Keep it up!!!

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make cave for bear?
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one thing: Wow.
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Had to mess a bit with the almighty bad-words-filter =P

Great, as usual :D
I'm feeling to be pulled over to the bad side.... AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P
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YEHAAAAAAAA!

Battle! great work dude!
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oh god this is just epic :D
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