Bla bla's sprites

[Bla bla bla 44]

Here's a new sprite:

Tried my best to look like Edward Elric from Fullmetal Alchemist. Comments?

[Infern112]

Wrong hairs proportions and colour, also I think that shoes need more contrast.
Only after reading your post I noticed that you drew Edward, so yea you should fix his hairs first:
http://images.wikia.com/xana/images/f/fb...-elric.jpg

[Bla bla bla 44]

But i used the same colours as this picture:

Edward (Click to View)

[JustMe]

in the original pic you can see his shoes because of the glance, but your sprite doesnt have it, at least not similar. use different color or make it bigger than his pants. besides his shoes are slightly red.
his left arm is longer than his right one. finally: dont draw noses, or dont use dark contrast for nose.

[Gespenst]

You should work on making base.
Before you post it, better look for flaws.
Draw noses but not that big.

Do not fallow same colors as picture show.

[ossiee]

realy good sprite bla bla bla 44, you have realy improved in shading and in proportions, i like the hair shading too.
keep going bla bla bla 44, good luck!

[Marko pro]

You are really improve your self...


Can you see differents??
Keep it up!

[Bla bla bla 44]

Yup big difference ^^. Here's a new one:

It's Spectra from Bakugan. A lot of time put in this.

[JustMe]

Yup big difference ^^. Here's a new one:

It's Spectra from Bakugan. A lot of time put in this.

realy good, but i think he need more contrast since his hair and his skin looks the same.

[drako]

I see some nice detailings on it. Put some more contrast on that cloak to make the shading visible. His hands are not visible or they are hidden under his cloak. Keep it up. I see many good improvements in it.
How do you improve so quickly? Any secret to share???