here is a new sprite
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05-25-2012, 11:55 PM
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The design is very cool & her weapon seems to match up with her apparel.
You seem to have forgot the shading for her hair, it looks rather flat notice how you stopped your shading @ an approximate width for each of the objects, face, clothing, shoes...arms Her hair is the only one that seems to be devoured by the large ammount of light you had placed on her. please fix that and her pony tail as well you're getting better btw +another thing (this is just my personal opinion) I find it extremly weird for her to have that as her natural hair color i don't mind so much but i think it would look better to have a darker color instead (such as her gloves or shorts) possibly throw out the bright red and make it look browner? i suppose... or you can just desaturate it, since it looks to concentrated by all means ignore what I'm saying if it looks any worse :P +seriously consider on making an animation for her. performing some sort of mage move on an enemy (I can totally see her as a playable character if you develop her more)
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Thanks given by: JoHo15
i have fix the hair
and yeah she will be a char in a mod on that i´m working Thanks given by: Marko pro , Jahvansi , Bla bla bla 44 , The Hari
06-14-2012, 07:34 PM
rock: hard, strong, big, cracked.
your char has nothing of this. if he´s an embodiment of rock you should add more muscle, make upperbody bigger with short legs, color skin grey or something like this. for now he´s not bad but only a normal char without special characteristic. Thanks given by: Marko pro
06-14-2012, 07:39 PM
your sprites are pretty nice, very clean. maybe kinda too clean(?) i think you should connect your current style with some part of your old sprites. this mean add more (i can't find this word) "lines of shading", you know, like on your old works, for example: Roy, Dave and also could trying add third colour of shading, like in Flash. Last thing (not so big deal) - eyes could be more round. Are you made it in 79x79 size?
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