Phil's mading spriteness

[The Hari]

wow, pretty amazing, really nice to see how fast you improves your skills. only thing about which i can complain is too simple shading of pants in comprasion to rest. wings and hair are epic.

[The Lost Global Mod]

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[ossiee]

omg, this shading style is just awesome!! thats a huge improvement, the proportions are way better,
thats just too much of improvement, thats great, keep it up dude, your a great spriter!

[Marko]

Everything is great, i would suggest you to add details into sprite no matter on original.
Try different pose and avoid using background!

Skin is lack of contrast, well if you make revamp sprite you dont have to choose same color, mean same hue of green, blue, whatever.. cuze those old sprite dont have to be awesome. Mybe it alrady has problem with contrast and you just forward to new sprite.
in genaral i would preffer more darker hue of colors, this looks to childish, no offensive

keep it up i want to see more of you

[The Lost Global Mod]

collab with mundvoll.. if you wanna see me work
go here http://www.livestream.com/philsspritingchannel :P
(for those really interested its best to have both channels open, we switch from time to time)


outcome:

[The Lost Global Mod]

@Prince_Freeza: I have done my homework, what is my grade on it?

[Ariel]

WTF i totally LOVE it but pleaseeeeee change the blue shirt
OMG man i really liked the pose the hair the pants the colors OO
i liked everything keep this style up dude
but srsly change the blue shirt it dosent fit the style
just make it simple 2 values of blue and put the basic shape of the muscles, nothing more!

[The Lost Global Mod]

^ easily fixed, thanks to layers

[Ariel]

i would say also take that thick dark blue line at the upper part of the shirt and make it tiny so we hardly see it
take the light blue over this big dark blue

[Jahvansi]

awesome sprite man, definitly the best from you till now

for critic, i agree with Dh, the only thing which could be changed is the shirt shading imo.