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[Ariel]

if u would add the sword it surely will be my fav sprite of urs
i dont see anything bad in him however i also dont see something really unique and special (a guy standing in the normal standing pose)
thats why maybe a weapon can take it to the next level
u did a good job with him..

[Marko]

Great!!, one question in which size you made this one?

@V, then when is prite more detailed make it in bigger size!

[Bla bla bla 44]

Ok, i found some time to sprite.

Great!!, one question in which size you made this one?

The usual, 79X79.

if u would add the sword it surely will be my fav sprite of urs

I tried:

[Ariel]

good but try make the sword better by adding lights on it and make it feel like its 3d and not plate
also i would prefer having more contrast between the sword and the other parts ,lighter like the hood

[Gespenst]

Why not to add sword to other hand and delete sword in his right hand?
Also, can I try to draw refference for you?

there was chainsaw guy from one tournament, something like steam punk

[Bla bla bla 44]

Found time to sprite again(kinda procrastinating but whatever :P).
- The reference from EXG9
I made him more like a chinese fighter than steam punk, i hope you don't mind. His mech arm and hair bothered me a lot.

good but try make the sword better by adding lights on it and make it feel like its 3d and not plate

It can be a sand-stone sword or something. :P

[Bla bla bla 44]

Time for a new one. How about a facepic?

- original
I fixed my scanner and tried to colour a scribble i drew. I think i used the wrong colours but whatever. :P

[Marko]

Nice to see your facepic..
Black lines are dirty mean they dont have proper motion.. they should be clean. :P

Also avoid using color of background same as hair color(in this example) or shirt skin etc.

In overall i like it

and hair texture is wrong
EDIT: quick quick quick edit..

[Gespenst]

Let me tell you something.
1st. For a facepic draw full facepic from like shoulders (like now you made) to the end of the hair.
2nd. Do not use thick brush for details on face and other parts. (I mean dont use thick black color for that)
3.ill make a base of your face pic

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[Bla bla bla 44]

Also avoid using color of background same as hair color(in this example) or shirt skin etc.

Will remember that next time. :P

hair texture is wrong

Yeah, i just smudged it.

quick quick quick edit..

Looks better. :P

1st. For a facepic draw full facepic from like shoulders (like now you made) to the end of the hair.

It was the end of the textbook so i had no space. :P

Do not use thick brush for details on face and other parts. (I mean dont use thick black color for that)

It was a 3px brush.

ill make a base of your face pic

Looks awesome.

Tried to make a sprite from my own reference:

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