Bla bla's sprites

[Marko]

Sprite itself is very good..
no shading in hair, no problem

i will show you other way, but someother day. :P

for gif, hmm you might see problem for yourself, Look at the shoulder careful, if you dont let me know..

[Gespenst]

Problem is shoulders, they are dislocating.
Try for yourself to make same frames in real life.
And whatch how yours shoulders move
they shouldnt rotate, yes they can move 1 pixel to side, but not to up, down or rotate, cuz he isnt streching his shoulders, maybe arms lower part, but no other
part.
Also, he looks unnatural now, of course its hard for your skills to make his body move to make it more realistic.
BTW is his last frames, where that yellow thing appears, its that like little blast? If yes, then coat should move a bit.
His legs doesnt look good when he is waving like that.
He should stand hard, like samurai with his sword, like karate fighter, like a rock.

Now he is standing like "after yellow blast I will fly away"
later I will edit your sprites and show how I wanned to make
overall is good, but you should work on legs a bit, cuz now its like butt form a front, its like his a** facing us.

[Marko]

I promised you that i will show you way how you could give highlights to facep's hair.. os here it is

i was in rush, so quality its not superb but thats not the point anyway

[Gespenst]

here bla bla
I have made some edit

I hope you wont mind
1st. added some locks of hair
2nd. added some lighter locks of hair.
3rd. again added some lighter locks of hair and also later added some shiny hair parts
4th. Added some contrast between light and dark and also added lighter shades on a face

[Marko]

You really have to brag yourself everytime.. :P

I am glad I winced EXG9 to do this
Yea look at his example its way better


EDIT V: thanks but lol dude, you are much better spriter, thats for sure, so you know better way haha

[Gespenst]

Marko, its not that I am against you or anything but you showed how in the end should look and I showed progress and result.
Only result is not enough if you want to show things how its done.
And again, I didnt mean to insult you or anything. Just giving a hand for bla bla.
Bla bla, Try to shade hair for your self. Dont look at mine just try to do yours. Everyone result and style is different.

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Marko, its not because I am better or so.
Its for Bla bla to choose.
Better is not an option.
Its not like I am posted so bla bla could choose mine instead of yours.
Bla bla, I hope to see more form you

[Bla bla bla 44]

Thank you guys, both of you. I really had no idea of how to shade the hair.
Anyways, i'm back to spriting again. I was pretty busy these days and i just couldn't start spriting. But now i did so here's a new one:
- Kouma
- Reference
I tried new pants shading. Also the hair sucks again. I gotta practice that.

[Gespenst]

what the puck are you doing with the hair? same as reff? you dont need o do it, different body shading but hairs stays same?
here is kouma's hair.

your hairs should be not like in reff, more like my posted pic, cuz that one is windy effect and yours no.

[Marko]

It could be one of the frame in windy effect gif.. :P

I just love pants shading, and shirt, Outstanding!!! ;D

[Bla bla bla 44]

Yeah i just got a frame from the gif so that's why the hair is like that. Anyhows i tried to make a facepic again:
It may be a little off LF2 style. :P
Oh and don't mind me for replying every five days, i just feel too lazy to even write anything.