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12-15-2015, 05:54 PM
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Hey, that's a very nice start!
The upper body is very well done, but I could spot problems with the lower. The hip is not moving sideways as much as the shoulder, and this frame in particular:
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has the left dark leg move too far to the side, making it seem like he's about to turn towards the screen. You gotta try fixing this before trying out something new :P
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(12-15-2015, 05:54 PM)A-Man Wrote: The hip is not moving sideways as much as the shoulder, and this frame in particular:
has the left dark leg move too far to the side, making it seem like he's about to turn towards the screen. You gotta try fixing this before trying out something new :P
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I wonder what his head looks like.....
Anyway his right shoulder ( I think he is facing the screen, I may be wrong however ), looks a little bit strange, or is it just me?
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(12-16-2015, 05:48 PM)Faker Wrote: Old man Woody
A sketchy version.
Reminds me of Frank Miller's take on Batman. Conceptually, that is. I still think you should concentrate on Black-White drawings, though, since it seems to be your forte.
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a** looks weird
Left part is big and right side is even bigger plus the upper body goes too much to the left
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(01-11-2016, 06:55 PM)Ariel Wrote: a** looks weird
Left part is big and right side is even bigger plus the upper body goes too much to the left
Because screw proportions, this is art!
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