sumthing like arT or something

[MnM]

@Gad: I might have been rampant and harsh or over emphasizing with my criticism but all I wanted to tell now is that the percentage of completion of the work. There is no doubt that this a great drawing, however Sagner can keep these ideas in his mind while making amends(if at all he is going to make some). I also have made few personal suggestions along with the criticism in-case you didn't notice. No one is exaggerating. Sagner might have already made decisions of what to edit, there is no harm in suggesting some of them is what I felt, so that he won't forget them/ might not have noted the little mistakes(which might even be irrelevant or even not needed to be corrected).

Apologies if that was harsh! and don't get discouraged

[Gespenst]

Judging by my previous artworks, you do realize that it's simple drawing/painting just to show the character, not the technique and stuff, also there was no technique or if there was it would be just a simple outline and color to fill the gap between some stuff.

[Gespenst]

6 frames

[A-Man]

Hey, that's a very nice start!
The upper body is very well done, but I could spot problems with the lower. The hip is not moving sideways as much as the shoulder, and this frame in particular:


has the left dark leg move too far to the side, making it seem like he's about to turn towards the screen. You gotta try fixing this before trying out something new :P

[AmadisLFE]

Gr8 Drawing M8, reall- Cough Cough Cough Cough Cough Vomit

* Random Noises *

Great running frames Fake Sanger ( #TheFakePartWasAJoke ), What I am about to say is mentioned already.

The hip is not moving sideways as much as the shoulder, and this frame in particular:


has the left dark leg move too far to the side, making it seem like he's about to turn towards the screen. You gotta try fixing this before trying out something new :P

Yes.... Amadis has been murdered by King Vegeta

( I am high on Roleplays, I will see you all tommorow in a more normal state )

[Gespenst]

Teaser

[AmadisLFE]

I wonder what his head looks like.....

Anyway his right shoulder ( I think he is facing the screen, I may be wrong however ), looks a little bit strange, or is it just me?

[Gespenst]

Old man Woody
A sketchy version.

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And redrawn version of Dowain.

[klodasmone]

Old man Woody
A sketchy version.

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Reminds me of Frank Miller's take on Batman. Conceptually, that is. I still think you should concentrate on Black-White drawings, though, since it seems to be your forte.

[Gespenst]