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[char]Lex
#1
This is the character i'm making for tgquan67 (this can be considered as a representative char).
He has fire and ice moves (yes, tgquan67 likes firzen) but with more melee moves (and yes, i like melee.)

Here's the stance so far.

[Image: lex2fg9.png]

any comments?

btw, i've already made a breathing sprite but it sucks, so it would be great if some one can help me with that ^^ (and i won't forget to give credits ^^)
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#2
if the char is faced left the armor will jump ^^
why is the face only at one piece normal?
hair doesnt fit
why does he have 2 body colors?
and why the hell are the shoes purple?
All in all bad c&p
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#3
This mask isn't good.
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#4
Actually i don't like very much when the char is made of a bunch of copy & paste.
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A little improvement:

[Image: lex2og2.png]


(may be i'm not a really good spriter :( )
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#6
i like the fourth version, but you have to change mask! It's not good xD.
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#7
In my opinion, the best is third version.

I agree with Gad. You must change mask :)
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If u want to make a new char, why don't u draw new pics? Lex is a worm, as u know. So can u draw a worm-based char?
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*cought cought* Why drawing a worm? The character is cool as it is...

TITLE: a idea
make cave for bear?
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argh, I always thought, I left a comment in here.... obviously not :P

Anyways, the character himself looks good, but there's the problem with the in-game-thing. The sprite-flip will look strange with an ice- and a fire-arm. However, an idea just popped into my mind: how about making the arms punch with fire whereas the legs kick with ice? Then you'd avoid any awkward sprite-flip-buglike things ;)

I just don't get why everybody is complaining about the mask. I mean, ok, it could have a little more metallic look than as of now but that's actually all...

One thing you might have to redo: the icy arm looks a little thin compared to the other one. Accident or intended?

Rest: nice work! :)
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