[Kicker] Lf2 First Sprite Of My First Char

[dunce326]

Hy...
I Dunce326 I a NewComer
And This Is My First Character Sprite

[snorsorbet]

The shoes are nice, but the pants could use some darker shading. His hair is just a pile of white stuff and it seems to fusion together with the eyes. Get some shading on the hair, but don't use gray shading. Use some gray-blue shading, otherwise it will look very boring.
And BTW welcome to LFE :P

[Lauli]

Welcome to the forums!

About your sprite:
Compare it with a normal LF2 sprite and you'll see that you got many proportions wrong. Especially the hands and the head are too short/small.

[dunce326]

Yeah I Try Again And Again When it Looks Good To Me I Send The New Version Of The Sprite And Tnx To Welcome In LFE

[prince_freeza]

here is a tip 4 uno offence)
longer arms more shading and the hair is totaly in the way.
with some work u will manage to improve this char.

[dunce326]

Ok I Fixsed Some Things...
Hair,Pants And Arms
I Fink It Likes Little Gooder

[snorsorbet]

His pants are still somehow wierd. His right arm looks pasted onto the body... That's really all.

[Angel_Adam]

fix the right arm from my guessin ur not good at shadeing this char is copy and paste do more work on him

[prince_freeza]

hes gotta a point there as for what snorsobret the pant look funky fix them

[dunce326]

I fixed what you asked but, that pants... i don't know what to do its to hard And I aded some dager For fun

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Plz help me with that pants

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Oh Finaly...
I Fixed That Pants
Here The Results