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[Elias]

Well Reaper I was thinking Manji making some ancient ritual and he can't move everybody well how about instead of the army and the castle he just make the main people go to another world. Also the new Manji doesn't want to destroy the world, no way. Also did you read my last story, Manji and new Manji made a deal. Also it will give plenty of things to work on then we might have more char because they are in a new world, then the story will be longer and not that short.
I will edit more to this also if we are okay with this can some one make a new World Map.
Edit: Manji doesn't want to end the battle quicker he want's it to be big, a huge war that would be know for years.
Okay here is a sneak peak if enough people agree.
"Man this battle is so boring, I should make it more interesting, yes I know what to do."
Lame I know.

[Reaper]

Ah, sorry, I thought he wouldn't give a s*** about the deal as he is kinda demonic. Anyway, I'm not sure whether that explains the why... Unless he wants to save the world from that war, so he warps everybody involded in it away. I guess I could get used to that, but remember:
"So we made a deal, you can take over me but when you have done with Z and the demon I will take over this body again."
Well, what do the others think?

[Elias]

Okay since Manji is another soul here is a new background story and new skills.

Background story: The soul that poses Manji now came from long before any one was even in one world. I was used to be a human but later it lost it's human form and became a spirit. For thousands of years it wondered in different worlds but one time it possessed a human body. After that body died the spirit took other greate warriors form sometimes it came in there minds and took over the person body when it allowed sometimes took a dying hero to help him complete his destiny. Some times it was good sometimes it was bad bad never was it one for the whole human body. Later it wound Manji and took over his body but he felt the true inner power of Manji and made him immortal so he could help him and would be happy for a long time.
Skills: Good as The Crimson One, really powerful at sword fighting, can make one ancient ritual when takes Manji body, can travel to any shadow without being connected to it, can some powerful shadow minions, and has the power to destroy weak mind.

@Reaper: Yes I will never forget the promises.

@Everybody: I hope you agree with changing the world and dose Lord Anubis can write in the story sins his hero is dead.

[Zabobula]

Um...yeah...Manji....let me make one thing clear.

ME AND YOU ARE NOT FROM THE SAME PLANET.

[Elias]

Yes I know sorry will change.
Also are you okay with my idea of changing the world.

[Zabobula]

If you can write it so that everyone understands it then I'm fine with it. To me this is all episodic anyway.

[Evil Sonidow]

Okay, I have a big change in the story.
How about the whole world that they are in vanish and the main people, the army, and Julian's castle go to another world, but I want to write all of that .
Also I hope everybody understand me.

I'm agaisnt it.

what does it help if we are suddenly in another world?
- why will the main people, the army and the castle go to another world? How? Why doesn't the rest? Don't tell me that the evil part of Manji is rescuing them
and another thing: What are they going to do after they defeated Julian then?

Valid questions, but the main point is that we shouldn't kill Julian so fast. He IS the main antagonist in the story, and if he's defeated that easily he just doesn't deserve that. Seriously, look at Zab's entry. Julian gave him the ring, made him powerful, and 'Z' treats him like someone else? That's totally disrespectful and as such he should be punished.

Well Reaper I was thinking Manji making some ancient ritual and he can't move everybody well how about instead of the army and the castle he just make the main people go to another world. Also the new Manji doesn't want to destroy the world, no way. Also did you read my last story, Manji and new Manji made a deal. Also it will give plenty of things to work on then we might have more char because they are in a new world, then the story will be longer and not that short.
I will edit more to this also if we are okay with this can some one make a new World Map.
Edit: Manji doesn't want to end the battle quicker he want's it to be big, a huge war that would be know for years.
Okay here is a sneak peak if enough people agree.
"Man this battle is so boring, I should make it more interesting, yes I know what to do."
Lame I know.

The story CAN be longer without doing time-travel crap. It's messy and it's going to be harder to come up with something new at the moment rather than adapting. Also, it's not 'Manji' that wants the battle to be big, it's you (and I agree, for this kind of war it has to be great, epic).
I'm glad you also know that's lame, and I will edit it if you write that because it completely sucks.

[Elias]

Well okay so you say it's a crappy idea.
Also Z only cares that he has power and he doesn't care who gave it.
The votes.
Good idea:1
Don't really care as long as good:1
Horrible idea:1
So far no winner.

[Evil Sonidow]

The main problem is that you all fail to respect hierarchy. Julian is A LOT stronger than Z is. He MUST respect him or DIE. Worse part is that Julian gives the impression to be a pussy because he lets subordinates treat him like that.

Also, a message for Pi-face and Zab: STOP MAKING YOUR CHARS OVERLY POWERFUL. It's ridiculous.

[Elias]

Also, a message for Pi-face and Zab: STOP MAKING YOUR CHARS OVERLY POWERFUL. It's ridiculous.

Okay the New Manji will be little bit stronger then the real Manji okay just quarter stronger, but is okay that I just say it that he is really powerful just for fun.