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lol maplestory.
But seriously, Way to suggest more female characters, Pi. Now things are going to get a little more interesting.
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08-28-2009, 08:14 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-28-2009, 12:36 PM by Reaper.)
Well, its not about posting female character profiles in here. The main thing is integrating them in the story. And I don't know if we can do that with those godnesses and so on.
@Zab: I don't want to write a post in the story thread without going on with it, so i will write it in here. That Noir was supposed to be an illusion of Julian in order to make a trap for the heroes as the real Noir was caught be Z. But your right, I didn't write that good, its a bit confusing now. I will try to change it, its just a bit hard with those posts regarding all the characters. Maybe the cell wasn't a good idea either. But your female servant of Julian could appear instead, it could be her trap. Wait some time, I'll edit it today, maybe even now if I am fast enough( I am at school atm.)
Oh and:
Quote:Quote:"I guess Z is atm intoxicated by his own might." epic post. XD
Not.
Can somebody explain me what is that funny/special about that? I don't get it.
Edit: I changed it, but I am in hurry right now( school). I might improve it if I find time this afternoon.
And the army wasn't supposed to be killed or to kill Julian. Like I said, manji is going t interfere and as Pi-face doesn't want to go on with him anymore, he could also lose his live for interfering in the fight and disrupt Julian.
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08-28-2009, 01:02 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-28-2009, 04:55 PM by Elias.)
Well one thing will be to kill Manji is that he is the one with the shadow so he can reformed him but it will take time and Reaper yes you made it confusing for us, just try to write long for couple but not for the whole place okay that's makes it much more confusing also did the battle already began.
Never mind about the three new char also I'm writing a new chapter right now
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(08-28-2009, 08:14 AM)Reaper Wrote: Oh and:
Quote:Quote:"I guess Z is atm intoxicated by his own might." epic post. XD
Not. Can somebody explain me what is that funny/special about that? I don't get it.
Ignore what ES wrote. I just liked what you said. Its not like there were any GRAMMER ERRURHS or anything. It's half true. I am intoxicated by my own might. But not atm.
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08-28-2009, 05:39 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-28-2009, 05:48 PM by Reaper.)
??? Now I am even more confused. But it doesn't matter anyway.
Just wanted to point something out: I didn't want to write those short chapters. I wanted to wait for you guys to write something. But then there was this discussion about changing the world and closing the forum novel for some time and so on, so I thought I should write something that brings every character into a new situation. But if you think that I completely failed and just confused you, I could still delete it. As I said, I didn't want to write it anyway. But I thought someone had to.( Like before when someone( in that case Zab) had to write something to get the story away from lotr.)
Edit: ok, I guess it is best to erase it. But I am expecting that you will do it better. Otherwise my vengeance will haunt you forever. But it will never reach you
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08-28-2009, 11:27 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-29-2009, 01:41 PM by Elias.)
Okay just a message to some people who joined Forum Novel.
Also I would be happy and some other users will be happy if you would write some chapters.
Lord Anubis: Yeah your comp is fixed, now get back to the forum novel!
Phil: Can you write something long, because you write in here really short and not often.
ES:Write something okay because you write rarely.
Hacker&Simoneon: You both wrote just two times, so can you please write some chapters.
no one: Good job at beginning but why did you stop.
Well I made this because Reaper, Zab, Drachi and me are the most active writers right now.
EDIT:Also we didn't had music in the forum novel for long time.
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Yeah...just because your character maybe dead doesn't mean stop there. I mean eventually, someone (including me) is going to die eventually so that's nothing to be worried about atm. I know there's more creative people than the ones Pi mentioned in his post. ES this includes you of all people...
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i am back....
i wasn't around here for few days and i kind a lost in story... but... now i am back and i posted my part....
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(08-29-2009, 01:37 PM)Pi-Face Wrote: I kinda lol on your story Pi-Face I lol-ed on your story too... You shouldn't ruin Daymio's part, the idea that Julian enters in Noir's body was great idea, and Daymio described it well with his long part. Your part is not long. It's short, with no detail descriptions and it only shows that Manji is a new(super-duper, legendary, epic, cool, awesome, epic, legendary...) Superman here, for example:
(08-29-2009, 01:37 PM)Pi-Face Wrote: well time Manji to the rescue.
(few seconds later...)
Then Manji reached his hands towards Noir and it went into him and then he pulled out Julian.
(few seconds later even more lol...)
Julian commanded and threw one of his ball at Manji and Noir, but Manji was to fast so he grabbed everyone and all of them well in a hole. Now... I know that this post is(super-uber-duper, extra...) long, but I had to notice that. Now I will try to think up something on this (new) direction of story and write it soon, or maybe some other guys will do it before me.
@ Reaper & Zab: Daymio message: please do something with Pi-Face's part of story, because he keeps everybody's posts on story.
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Fine, I will delete that, and will just write about Elias and Sophie, okay.
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