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MnM · 06-05-2010, 01:00 PM

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sick of continuous posts : i made some artworks:

Whoa a face pic after so long time!!!!! (Click to View)

Eddie · (This post was last modified: 06-06-2010, 08:09 AM by Eddie.)

Haha, the only problems with the cyborg you pointed out really - small arms etc. Swords seemed kind of thing, nice mask though. Good effort FirzenX.
Cat picture made me laugh alot.
And the head seems a bit small on the face picture, but nice try

MnM · (This post was last modified: 06-08-2010, 12:23 PM by MnM.)

k i'll correct it later. But now COmic Time:
This is made to appear funny and don say that there is no possibility for it to happen.
[Image: bjvjhgf9uj84u4exy.jpg]

Script:

Panel 1:
I came to 10th grade still no studies.
Panel 2:
Who Cares!!!
Panel 3:
(I am watching Ben 10.)
Panel 4:
Me: I think Eddie had studied well.
Eddie: haHAHAHAHHA!! LOLS!!!
Panel 5:
(me and my mates are in the exam hall.We are going to write General knowledge examination I put my head down in fear while everyone got thrilled by the Question paper.)
Panel 6 & 7:
I looked at the question paper . It had Ben 10's section for 50/100 marks.!!!!! It made me happier and to laugh like hell.Then i pointed my finger at eddie and made fun out of him.
Panel 8:
Then i went near him and made

and pointed finger again.

Panel 9:
(WTF) he punched me ON MY FACE ^^.

i'm tired of everything happening in this thread.
Don make me kick ur A*s . Reply here. And IT is A MUST!!!!!!!!

new guy made in PS and hand drawing:

hurt man (Click to View)

MnM · 06-18-2010, 01:12 PM

mods or admins lisn.... no one is posting in this thread. Don consider my posts as spam.... ahhhhh... i need replies badly.......

Silverthorn · 06-18-2010, 02:36 PM

It is not the fault of staff if nobody is replying. That solely depends on the participation of each individual in here.

Also, regarding your last picture (note that I will go straightly to the point, without trying to put the metaphoric lipstick on the pig): the head seems to be way too small. Also, there is no real symmetry in the face: the eyes, for instance, have entirely different shapes. Same with the ears. The coloring is imprecise (especially at the neck, it goes above the outlines, while the chest is not colored at all close to the clothes). Additionally, the human rarely consists of straight lines. If you use the line-tool for defining outlines, use short lines so that you can create more round shapes. Shading is inconsistent; both ears are light, while parts of the face are in the shade. Nose and mouth do not have the, in my opinion, too strong outlines making it hard to define them.

Ergo: still a lot to work on. Keep practicing!