Phil's mading spriteness

[Bamboori]

the shading contrast is way to low. there aren't any details, and face and hair look... unusual :P
but overall i somehow very like this sprite

[Reaper]

Yeah, biggest problem probably is the face. Where are the two face colours? As bamboori said, it really lacks shading as well as the hair. Might also be that the shape is a bit strange. Faces are, in my eyes, almost the hardest part to get right, so maybe leave a normal character's face aside until you get it right.
The body seems ok to me, maybe a bit too strong saturated, but that's it. If he is completely from scratch, then you get a big + for the proportions.
And - again repeating bamboori - add a little detail like a collar or a belt. Then its gonna be a very nice sprite.

[The Lost Global Mod]

thankies.. gotta improve it.. not now though (wasted too much precious time which i should use for learning) soo you can expect something tomorrow =)

[Alectric]

he's got a good stance man!
just need to make shading darker, and voila, a completely fine sprite!

[The Lost Global Mod]

here goes something..

my first attempt on phi.. the cat self of me.
he is supposed to be small lol
(on a side-note i guess i made him too small lol.. and argh didn't save the big version.. f*ck)

[PsychoPixels]

I would work more on the shape, aren't his arms a bit short? And his head is shrunken if you're aiming for an LF2 style. Relax the legs, looking at the left (our left) leg, it's stiff. The shading, I'd show more of the fur, if it's a cat and all. The tail is too thick, in my opinion, though.

[The Lost Global Mod]

probably gotta redo him anywayz. Thanks for the comment.
I am not sure, whether to aim for the lf2 style or not. A cat with oversized head would look a bit lol (its okay for my ava but as fighter? look the cat with the oversized-head will punch you to the deathz!!!)
sounds strange imo. About the fur part.. you mean to shade it like the hair of a normal char?
the tail.. too thick and too short i guess.

Marshall edited this post 07-27-2010 11:18 PM because:

Furry animals can be LF2 styled too (by Yakui) For your reference

[The Lost Global Mod]

not much to say.. supposed to be a remake of my first rep char try.
(look at the old work spoiler for reference)
and duh, me + bad skillz + rust = uber bad skillz.
i know most of the flaws but please c&c as much as you want.

[Silverthorn]

It sucks.
Okay, not completely. Char's left shoulder is a bit too much sticking out, the legs got a little short while upper body is extremely wide. Hardcore bodybuilder much? :P

Ramond edited this post 08-22-2010 01:16 PM because:

QFT!

[Marshall]

legs too short, body too bulky. face and hair okay for now