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Oliver's short stories
#16
I fixed the dark days of lfe story a little bit. It's a bit longer, and I tried putting some of the improvements reaper suggested.
And....
A funny fact was that NO ONE REALIZED WHO THE HOODED FIGURE WAS. SERIOUSLY. Since just every single story I've written includes moderators, why should THIS ONE BE ANY DIFFERENT?!
Nah, I'm not freaking out. I just find it weird that none of you realized who the guy was. No prizes for guessing who either.
Hint- hooded figure. Who could THAT be?

@Reaper- You don't use lightning, that privilege goes to SirFrog's Asc'An. You use magic, remember?
I do know what kind of powers I have. But in the first version the hooded guy/I used lightning. That's why I saw him as a member of a dark brotherhood worshipping me by wearing the same clothes and doing my job :P ~ Reaper

Reaper edited this post 08-22-2010 11:34 AM because:
No reaper-brotherhood guys who dress like me then? Aw...
I thought I wouldn't be a pathetic guy with lightning powers, though.
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Oliver's short stories - by oliveryungo - 07-22-2010, 06:46 AM
RE: LF2 Prologue - by Divisor - 07-22-2010, 07:44 AM
RE: LF2 Prologue - by oliveryungo - 07-22-2010, 09:05 AM
RE: LF2 Prologue - by Reaper - 07-22-2010, 11:43 AM
RE: LF2 Prologue - by oliveryungo - 07-22-2010, 11:51 AM
RE: LF2 Prologue - by Divisor - 07-22-2010, 12:03 PM
RE: LF2 Prologue - by oliveryungo - 07-23-2010, 04:53 AM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by Alectric - 08-14-2010, 11:06 AM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by Ascor - 08-14-2010, 11:22 AM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by Taniaetc - 08-14-2010, 12:28 PM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by oliveryungo - 08-15-2010, 06:10 AM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by Taniaetc - 08-15-2010, 06:16 AM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by oliveryungo - 08-15-2010, 06:20 AM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by Reaper - 08-15-2010, 04:18 PM
RE: Oliver's short stories - by oliveryungo - 08-22-2010, 04:33 AM



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