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Yay! I already thought you'd forget about it.
Very nice start I must say. Good length, vivid descriptions, some humor... + You made each character individual which is one of the most important things for a LFE story. What might be missing is a bit of suspense. I mean, if the eggs had found them before they got their weapons back, they would have some serious problems. Nevertheless this is looking like it's going to be awesome.
Dang, all you guys writing stories make me want to write an own one again...
The scary eyes of the Reaper fixated on a small koala in front of him. Blowfly knew that eyes couldn't talk, but it felt like they were demanding continuation. As the Reaper noticed that Blowfly didn't make an atempt to move, he raised his hands until he noticed that his scythe was still concealed in the barracks of the eggpire. How was he going to force the koala now? Dissolving into black dust the last thing he could see was a smiling koala with a katana in his hands.
Very nice start I must say. Good length, vivid descriptions, some humor... + You made each character individual which is one of the most important things for a LFE story. What might be missing is a bit of suspense. I mean, if the eggs had found them before they got their weapons back, they would have some serious problems. Nevertheless this is looking like it's going to be awesome.
Dang, all you guys writing stories make me want to write an own one again...
The scary eyes of the Reaper fixated on a small koala in front of him. Blowfly knew that eyes couldn't talk, but it felt like they were demanding continuation. As the Reaper noticed that Blowfly didn't make an atempt to move, he raised his hands until he noticed that his scythe was still concealed in the barracks of the eggpire. How was he going to force the koala now? Dissolving into black dust the last thing he could see was a smiling koala with a katana in his hands.