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my poetry
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K long time no see: XD here a humorous poem i wish:

THE NOODLE RACE

Once There lived three friends
Happy as ever, playing
in the lawn.
Feud has taken place
for there were no reasons.


They set up on a task,
The Noodle Race!.
To judge the justice
started eating noodles.
Two friends as if sketched a plan..

..connected the noodles to
the other and the latter
to the other.
It formed a chain of noodle
which only one could eat.


The bully occupied the middle
gulped noodles for his sake.
The other two acted as if.
Middle man finished last


But found the trap!
Didn't want to lose his friendship
accepted his defeat
imparted them he knew the plan
Dumbstruck sat the two blokes


Roar of laughter erupted
hand-in-hand walked the friends
down in the alley way
united by hear and soul.

Correct me or make some edits i want to make it perfect for my assignment XD.
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my poetry - by MnM - 05-25-2010, 06:23 PM
RE: my poetry - by lf2TimmE1 - 05-25-2010, 06:50 PM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-26-2010, 05:26 AM
RE: my poetry - by Bamboori - 05-26-2010, 05:04 PM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-26-2010, 05:51 PM
RE: my poetry - by Alectric - 05-26-2010, 11:05 PM
RE: my poetry - by LutiChris - 05-26-2010, 11:19 PM
RE: my poetry - by Marshall - 05-27-2010, 12:16 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-27-2010, 04:29 AM
RE: my poetry - by Alectric - 05-27-2010, 05:26 AM
RE: my poetry - by hell fightter - 05-27-2010, 05:50 AM
RE: my poetry - by Alectric - 05-27-2010, 06:53 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-27-2010, 09:28 AM
RE: my poetry - by hell fightter - 05-27-2010, 10:14 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-27-2010, 10:44 AM
RE: my poetry - by Bamboori - 05-27-2010, 11:13 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 05-27-2010, 11:57 AM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 11-06-2010, 03:24 PM
RE: my poetry - by The Lost Global Mod - 11-06-2010, 04:26 PM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 11-06-2010, 04:31 PM
RE: my poetry - by MnM - 11-11-2010, 12:17 PM



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