The Great Bot War

[oliveryungo]

Er, well, I suppose the backbone of the story isn't bad...(seeing as a lot of it, e.g the idea of a mod hq and a battle between mod and bots, comes from my story)
Problem is exactly that, though. That's an awful lot from my own story as well as the countless grammar mistakes. And oddly, there are...stage directions? like (smiles)
and odd spelling mistakes like "he's" when you're trying to say "his", which makes it more than a little bit weird.