02-22-2011, 05:55 AM
(This post was last modified: 02-22-2011, 05:56 AM by Apocalipsis.)
Quote:the colo is not good
the leopard and the girl
the girl is more important than the leopard , right ??
so you should make the leopard darker and the girl lighter
and the girl's hair
it's too bright , so it's make this sprite look like
the girl's hair is the most important
the leopard is important than the girl
and the leopard's shadow is not good
The girl is not more important than the leopard. Most times, I already have the design in mind before spriting so, color changing is not a option. This time it was dark skinned girl with some kind of bright yellow hair (was gonna do it white but changed opinion, before starting). The color of the leopard changed because a light-yellow looked bad, so I made it darker.
Quote:the girl's leg
you should make it longer because her toe is in the same line with the leopard stomach , it's bad in art
I just can't "make them longer", lol. Everything has a proportional size wich I can't change. In any case, I could change the position. But it's such an insignificant thing for me...
Quote:and the girl don't look like sitting in the leopard
So? Never said she was :p
Quote:6.5/10
You didn't like the colors and you rate 6.5/10? You must rate your own sprites with 2/10 most time then, cause there are a lot more proportions/position flaws in yours sprites than mine, imo. Don't take it as a offense though, I'm saying that you have quite high standarts, at the moment of evaluating sprites.