Ariel's Sprites

[klodasmone]

Critics, numbered, but completely random.

1. No crotch, sexless? 2. Torso muscles look awful. Only bodybuilders have that kind of wide muscles. I presume it's easier to draw it this way, but having in mind that HF characters are, if not teens, then young adults, it's only possible having that kind of musculature, if you're on steroids. 3. Left hand's glove should not be showing. 4 Legs aren't flushed out, i.e. maybe more meat on them. 5. Color palette is too dark; it looks like the character is carved out of wood. 6. Deltoid (shoulder) muscles are too long, it should be at around half of the chest muscles, not on the nipple level. And that leaves the biceps small. I've seen from your tutorial, that you've copied the muscle from the picture, but have in mind, that the muscle looks like that only when it's "posing for the camera". (I read too much of Tolstoy today, damn russian language can't seem to work with my english, but I hope, that you get what I mean.)

All in all, still leaves a lot to be desired.