10-13-2011, 08:13 PM
not bad for your start! I like most of the shading.
things i would improve:
- the waist looks a bit thin
- he has no neck [not sure if that was too important, correct me if i'm wrong.
- you can't really tell whether he has gloves on, or he has a green hand
- the shoes need a bit more darker shading in my opinion.
- get rid of the plant and try to make some fresh hair
things i would improve:
- the waist looks a bit thin
- he has no neck [not sure if that was too important, correct me if i'm wrong.
- you can't really tell whether he has gloves on, or he has a green hand

- the shoes need a bit more darker shading in my opinion.
- get rid of the plant and try to make some fresh hair

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