My sprites (chase123)

[chase123]

hm... allow me to be a bit harsh there:
- bad bad choice of colors: it's hard to distinguish some of his body parts. might make a bigger contrast to the shoulder pads and hair
- he has no neck? is he bandit's cousin?
- a bit too much details, for the size he is too much stuffed with details, go easy on him :P
- i don't think that the scarf, band, whatever that is, is just saying "screw you gravity" and goes up like that, might be useful for an animation but for a first frame it just looks WRONG
- The hair looks flat, it's too small for his head (or his head is too small for his hair)
- also too much hair is in his face, makes me think if he even can see straight, it's okay to let hair hang in, but you are literally planting it on his face, like it grows out of there.


guess that's it from me for now.

He has no neck because the scarf is hiding his neck,The scarf is in the air for style and it is because of the wind that it is up there.I will decrease the amount of hair on his face.

I will show you the image I based it off,so you can see I did not add or subtract any detail of it:

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