04-04-2012, 07:54 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-04-2012, 09:48 AM by Silverthorn.)
Mmmh, the balance is a little off. Look at how the spine goes if you were to draw it into the sprite. It currently goes like this: \ . Better would be | or, considering there is somebody at (in?) his back, even a /-like position. Thus, you balance out the composition.
Also, the facial expression is a bit funny. One rarely sees D:-faces. Don't know if that's intended or not but I guess I'd prefer a more menacing grimace. Just my two cents.
Nothing else to complain about, really; shading is superb, as usual.
Oh, just a quick question, is the skeleton intended to have a squid-like skull?![:p :p](https://lf-empire.de/forum/images/smilies/tongue.gif)
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Also, the facial expression is a bit funny. One rarely sees D:-faces. Don't know if that's intended or not but I guess I'd prefer a more menacing grimace. Just my two cents.
Nothing else to complain about, really; shading is superb, as usual.
Oh, just a quick question, is the skeleton intended to have a squid-like skull?
![:p :p](https://lf-empire.de/forum/images/smilies/tongue.gif)
@v: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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