Contest #18: Writing challenge - VOTING

[Lord Anu]

Allright, I'll try put it short.
BP
I quite liked the way Justin talks, I could imagine his cold and depressing voice in my head(that speech could be used in some movie trailer). And very good job turning Little Fighters as evil ones for a change. Vote.

Reaper
The plot itself is not very attractive, but the way you write is amazing(kinda when you wrote, Mark made look even bazilisk would envy, and the way Mark and Template argue). I really enjoyed reading it so... Vote =3

The Lost Global Mod
I really laughed reading that story, thought I don't know if it was really supposed to be a romance(cause at the end I was like.. wtf?). I could have pictured everything in my mind and that's why sudden changing of scenes do not bother me much. Only if the ending was better you would get a vote. Don't rush endings, they are important as much as begining and plot ;P

Azriel
Similar as BP's work. Fighters also described as evil and cursed to fight all the times(which I like, cause in game all we do is killing all those poor COMs and reading your story you managed to make me feel a little like a bad guy). You have great writing style and I would give you a vote too, but meh... Somehow I liked BP's better and didn't felt so evil or guilty after reading his. Still, keep it up.

Empirefantasy
What should I say...? I see you were trying to use mostly humor. Nicely done, you manage to make me smile. Only if the plot wasn't goin' so fast, as Azriel said(this happened and then that happened...). The story is charming, but I didn't liked how Dennis was using Davis's girl and then Davis responds he doesn't care and so on(seemed a bit too heartless for my taste[I usually like heartless jokes, but that wasn't a joke.] =D). Another time then try harder and you'll get vote from me.

Edit: damn it's long.