04-22-2012, 09:12 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-22-2012, 09:15 PM by empirefantasy.)
Lord Anubis Wrote:The story is charming, but I didn't liked how Dennis was using Davis's girl and then Davis responds he doesn't care and so on(seemed a bit too heartless for my taste[I usually like heartless jokes, but that wasn't a joke.] =D).
Story Wrote:-What money?-wondered Davis,-Oh, now I remember, you idiot were kidding me all the time in internet. Also you Dennis must pay for what you have done.
-I thought you didn’t care about her, as you said there in the cave,-said Dennis,-And you Woody are an idiot internet user.
You have not understood.It's not heartless.He just say so, because he is in a very critical moment and he want to forgive Dennis. But as you can see at the end of the story he really care about her.
(04-20-2012, 07:50 PM)Shane "Bane" Neumann Wrote: empirefantasySword of March?!
... What the sword of March? I have no clue what goes on there...
This story is a comedy.
Also sorry for no voting, I haven't read read all of your stories.No so much time these days

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