JoHo15´s Sprites

[Trickityhouses]

for that facepic That chin its a bit round on the left and very close to the mouth and the shading it a tad to heavy making her look kinda fat. There is a line in her neck that should extend down more and the shoulders are also way to narrow, if you show the line in the neck you should also do it for her shoulders/collar bone. I feel like the hair is really flat and looks like chunks of paper and dunno why her cleavage is showing at that point in the facepic. Im not a fan of those eyes but the coloring is pretty sharp and the sprite looks really good just not a fan of those eyes like bla bla said.

I can tell that youre getting better so keep it up. also not sure if you can afford one but a bamboo drawing tablet cost like 30-50 bucks. its pretty awesome and would probably make all ur drawing really great. ask for one next christmas if you are really into drawing