Hand Recolors/Sprites by Amadis

[STM1993]

Hi again guys here is my another sprite since Eddie commented I thought that working hard will improve my spriting so I did , and now here is my new sprite I do not know does it look good?

It looks like a badly done sprite from an impatient MS Paint user. Two main pointers:

1) The colours are too bright, too saturated, too much contrast. Its like looking at the sun.
2) Lack of shading. It only uses two colours for shading, and it won't look good that way.
3) I doubt green shirt and yellow pants go well together, at least not with that shading and saturation. Some colours just don't match.

Look at the original LF2 sprites carefully and look at how they shade it and notice how people don't make things so overly saturated.