03-15-2014, 12:39 PM
Although the sprite is nice Apoc, there's something about it that has me screaming at the screen: 'WHERE THE DAMNED HELL IS APOC?'. And because Siegvar asked me to do my commenting in points, you became my guinea pig when I saw you posted:
- Firstly, as everyone has said, the shading on the face isn't up to the Apoc parr that used to be, it's not too obvious.
- The hair and the shirt style of shading looks very different imho, the hair looks a lot more 2d and doesn't have the detail I'd expect from you.
- The shading on the shirt is the BEST part of this sprite if I am honest. The perfect usage of shading there produced a 3d effect of a rather more hourglass shaped lady and captured bust without making her look like she could float when she falls into a pool. This part of the sprite imho is exquisite.
As for the detail/design as an advantage, I'm going to agree with Gad, your designs are what really sets you aside and gives you the ability to add details to complete that design. It's not a one or the other but more a case of one leading to the other.
/offtopic
I did particularly love Gad's sprite, but to me the body was what stopped it from working for me. And that was the tide turner in Hari's favour. If I could have looked past that, Gad would have won. It was an extremely hard choice, but now I know Gad can produce non-humanoid creations and so it's bully-mode engage. If that eye could become an AI for Julian stages of LF2, I think I would melt in ecstasy.
Eddie
- Firstly, as everyone has said, the shading on the face isn't up to the Apoc parr that used to be, it's not too obvious.
- The hair and the shirt style of shading looks very different imho, the hair looks a lot more 2d and doesn't have the detail I'd expect from you.
- The shading on the shirt is the BEST part of this sprite if I am honest. The perfect usage of shading there produced a 3d effect of a rather more hourglass shaped lady and captured bust without making her look like she could float when she falls into a pool. This part of the sprite imho is exquisite.
As for the detail/design as an advantage, I'm going to agree with Gad, your designs are what really sets you aside and gives you the ability to add details to complete that design. It's not a one or the other but more a case of one leading to the other.
/offtopic
I did particularly love Gad's sprite, but to me the body was what stopped it from working for me. And that was the tide turner in Hari's favour. If I could have looked past that, Gad would have won. It was an extremely hard choice, but now I know Gad can produce non-humanoid creations and so it's bully-mode engage. If that eye could become an AI for Julian stages of LF2, I think I would melt in ecstasy.
Eddie
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