[Char] Deenis-S Complete

[STM1993]

Dude, it has been 3 years since you started making this character, yet you don't seem to have improved at all in either your english language or your DCing skills. I'm very disappointed.

This post will be the last time I'm helping you, you're on your own if you can't figure this out.

1) Ice Itr (Click to View)

DC-Code: <frame> 0 standing   pic: 0  state: 0  wait: 5  next: 1  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0  centerx: 39  centery: 79  hit_a: 0  hit_d: 0  hit_j: 0  hit_Fj: 282  hit_Ua: 299 hit_Uj: 351 hit_Dj: 266  hit_Fa: 278 hit_ja: 346   wpoint:      kind: 1  x: 23  y: 55  weaponact: 23  attacking: 0  cover: 0  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0   wpoint_end:     itr:      kind: 0  x: 19  y: 24  w: 81  h: 44  dvx: 18  fall: 80  vrest: 7  bdefend: 30  injury: 60 effect: 3   itr_end:   bdy:      kind: 0  x: 21  y: 18  w: 43  h: 62   bdy_end: <frame_end>

itr "fall: 80". Take away.

2/4) Shadows on Floor (Click to View)

DC-Code: <frame> 248 super_arrow   pic: 38  state: 3  wait: 1  next: 249  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0  centerx: 39  centery: 78  hit_a: 0  hit_d: 0  hit_j: 0  sound: data\020.wav   opoint:      kind: 1  x: 95  y: 41  action: 0  dvx: 50  dvy: 0  oid: 233  facing: 30   opoint_end:   wpoint:      kind: 1  x: 39  y: 48  weaponact: 30  attacking: 0  cover: 1  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0   wpoint_end:   bdy:      kind: 0  x: 26  y: 12  w: 27  h: 68   bdy_end: <frame_end>

id:  18  type: 0  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-Dennis\s-dennis.dat
id: 2000  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\heal.dat
id: 2077  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\davis_ball2.dat
id: 232  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-Dennis\s-dennis_wind.dat  
id:  19  type: 0  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-DennisEX\s-dennisEX.dat
id: 2122  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-DennisEX\freeze_col_and_freeze_ww.dat
id: 350  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-DennisEX\supermove.dat
id: 398  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-DennisEX\supermove_1_and_2.dat
id: 503  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-DennisEX\Dennis_Reviver_ball.dat #char_ball
id: 997 type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-DennisEX\Revive.dat
opoint. "oid: 233".
There is no "id: 233 type: 3 file: ..."
"action: 0". Ball ID have "<frame> 0"?
If no, action is wrong.

3) Cannot summon directly (Click to View)

DC-Code: <frame> 236 milk   pic: 83  state: 3  wait: 3  next: 55  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0  centerx: 52  centery: 79  hit_a: 0  hit_d: 0  hit_j: 0   opoint:      kind: 2  x: 42  y: 51  action: 30  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  oid: 122  facing: 0   opoint_end:   wpoint:      kind: 1  x: 42  y: 51  weaponact: 35  attacking: 0  cover: 0  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0   wpoint_end:   bdy:      kind: 0  x: 24  y: 14  w: 31  h: 64   bdy_end: <frame_end>

wpoint. "kind: 1". Change to "kind: 3".
"next: 55". Change to "next: 999".
Let milk drop. If not milk cannot drink properly when attack.

5) Transform (Click to View)

DC-Code: <frame> 346 transform   pic: 116  state: 8057  wait: 6  next: 999  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0  centerx: 26  centery: 77  hit_a: 0  hit_d: 0  hit_j: 0   wpoint:      kind: 1  x: 37  y: 46  weaponact: 30  attacking: 0  cover: 0  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0   wpoint_end:   bdy:      kind: 0  x: 21  y: 18  w: 43  h: 62   bdy_end: <frame_end>

id:  18  type: 0  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-Dennis\s-dennis.dat
id: 2000  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\heal.dat
id: 2077  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\davis_ball2.dat
id: 232  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-Dennis\s-dennis_wind.dat  
id:  19  type: 0  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-DennisEX\s-dennisEX.dat
id: 2122  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-DennisEX\freeze_col_and_freeze_ww.dat
id: 350  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-DennisEX\supermove.dat
id: 398  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-DennisEX\supermove_1_and_2.dat
id: 503  type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-DennisEX\Dennis_Reviver_ball.dat #char_ball
id: 997 type: 3  file: sprite\s_dennis\S-DennisEX\Revive.dat
No "id: 57 type: 0 file: ...".
dennis_s transform to dennis_sEX.
dennis_sEX id: 19.
"state: 8057" change to "state: 8019".

6) Two "<frame> 280 (Click to View)

DC-Code: <frame> 280 super_arrow   pic: 107  state: 3  wait: 1  next: 281  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0  centerx: 39  centery: 78  hit_a: 0  hit_d: 0  hit_j: 0  sound: data\020.wav   opoint:      kind: 1  x: 95  y: 41  action: 0  dvx: 40  dvy: 0  oid: 232  facing: 30   opoint_end:   wpoint:      kind: 1  x: 39  y: 48  weaponact: 30  attacking: 0  cover: 1  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0   wpoint_end:   bdy:      kind: 0  x: 26  y: 12  w: 27  h: 68   bdy_end: <frame_end>   <frame> 280 revive   pic: 88  state: 18  wait: 12  next: 999  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  centerx: 39  centery: 79  hit_a: 0  hit_d: 0  hit_j: 0 wpoint:      kind: 1  x: 45  y: -999  weaponact: 35  attacking: 0  cover: 1  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0   wpoint_end:   itr:      kind: 0  x: 0 y: 150000 w: 150 h: 150 dvx: 0 dvy: 0 fall: -1 arest: 100 bdefend: 0 injury: -300 effect: -1   itr_end:   bdy:      kind: 0  x: 19  y: 15  w: 28  h: 65   bdy_end: <frame_end>

Cannot have two frame same number.
Data messy. Your frame data = "0,1,4,2,3,7,8,9,5,6,9"
Arrange your frame numbers. Frame number order should be "0,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10". No error that way.

8) Catching (Click to View)

DC-Code: <frame> 120 catching   pic: 51  state: 9  wait: 0  next: 121  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0  centerx: 36  centery: 79  hit_a: 0  hit_d: 0  hit_j: 0  sound: data\015.wav   cpoint:      kind: 1  x: 67  y: 39      vaction: 131  throwvz: -842150451  hurtable: 1 throwinjury: -842150451 decrease: 7   cpoint_end:   wpoint:      kind: 1  x: 55  y: 39  weaponact: 35  attacking: 0  cover: 0  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0   wpoint_end:   bdy:      kind: 0  x: 19  y: 15  w: 28  h: 65   bdy_end: <frame_end>     <frame> 121 catching   pic: 50  state: 9  wait: 0  next: 0  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0  centerx: 37  centery: 79  hit_a: 0  hit_d: 0  hit_j: 165 hit_Fj: 163 hit_Ja: 400   cpoint:      kind: 1  x: 61  y: 39      vaction: 130  aaction: 122  taction: -232  throwvz: -842150451  hurtable: 1 throwinjury: -842150451 decrease: -7   cpoint_end:   wpoint:      kind: 1  x: 58  y: 42  weaponact: 35  attacking: 0  cover: 0  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0   wpoint_end:   bdy:      kind: 0  x: 19  y: 15  w: 28  h: 65   bdy_end: <frame_end>     <frame> 122 catching   pic: 51  state: 9  wait: 0  next: 123  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0  centerx: 38  centery: 79  hit_a: 0  hit_d: 0  hit_j: 165 hit_Fj: 163 hit_Ja: 400   cpoint:      kind: 1  x: 61  y: 39      vaction: 130  throwvz: -842150451  hurtable: 1 throwinjury: -842150451 decrease: 7   cpoint_end:   wpoint:      kind: 1  x: 56  y: 40  weaponact: 35  attacking: 0  cover: 0  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0   wpoint_end:   bdy:      kind: 0  x: 19  y: 15  w: 28  h: 65   bdy_end: <frame_end>     <frame> 123 catching   pic: 52  state: 9  wait: 0  next: 121  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0  centerx: 31  centery: 79  hit_a: 0  hit_d: 0  hit_j: 165 hit_Fj: 163 hit_Ja: 400  sound: data\014.wav   cpoint:      kind: 1  x: 58  y: 38      injury: 15  vaction: 132  throwvz: -842150451  hurtable: 1 throwinjury: -842150451 decrease: 3   cpoint_end:   wpoint:      kind: 1  x: 56  y: 40  weaponact: 35  attacking: 0  cover: 0  dvx: 0  dvy: 0  dvz: 0   wpoint_end:   bdy:      kind: 0  x: 19  y: 15  w: 28  h: 65   bdy_end: <frame_end>

"wait: 0".
Change to "wait: 2, wait: 0, wait: 5, wait: 4" respectively.