01-15-2017, 12:42 PM
' Wrote:Interesting, I'd like to see more!I will make more. I am planning to make more. New chapter every week, unless I will be busy and will have to do some other stuff.
The boy name is Daniel.
Silverthorn Wrote:Also, Hao hasn't been described all too much yet. I'm picky, I knowI have not introducted Hao yet, just showed that there is a man. I am not used to writting very detailed stuff yet, mostly what I've been trying to write is a comic scripts for myself in which I don't realy write much stuff about character unless it's a dialogue or monologue. I like keep most of the things in my head, which is maybe not realy good actualy but saves some time. Also drawing is the main thing when it comes to comics.
It's okey to be picky
' Wrote:Nice idea with the sketches scattered inbetween. Are you going to keep this up? Or, even better, switch to pencil and paper... because your strongpoint is definitely with traditional mediaThank you. I will switch to pencil and replace current ones.
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